Elyorbek_Jumaboyev

1 years ago

Commented

Good

ch 21 You just need to run?

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Elyorbek_Jumaboyev

1 years ago

Replied to Elyorbek_Jumaboyev

Real story

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Eastern · Peace_in_Chaos

Elyorbek_Jumaboyev

1 years ago

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Everything is good so far. I like the characters and writing style. Grammar is also good right now. Good luck on working hard. I think real start starts from the chapter 'Death'.

Master Of The Universe

Eastern · Peace_in_Chaos

Elyorbek_Jumaboyev

1 years ago

Commented

Scenes in this chapter are very awesome!

ch 0 5 A Tragic End

Master Of The Universe

Eastern · Peace_in_Chaos