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Very Unique, haven't seen a story where the person has reincarnated over 800 times before. I liked the story a lot, although I'm only on chapter 200ish. The characters are pretty decent some feel fleshed out but also a long time between girls he meets it makes it hard to keep track of it all. Still its a really good story and i recommend it.
Nice personal attack.... It seems we have quite different takes on the character's actions and their impact. While I respect your perspective, I'd like to offer a different angle. Yes, he did household chores and was put through rigorous training, but let's not forget the context of the world they're in. It's a harsh environment where strength and resilience are key to survival. The protagonist's growth, both in skill and character, can be attributed to these tough love methods. The collar, as controversial as it is, could be seen as a plot device to symbolize control and power dynamics, which are central themes in many stories of this genre. And while we can debate the fairness of his treatment, the narrative often uses such situations to build tension and develop characters. Moreover, the outcomes of these experiences are not solely negative. They've contributed to his development, preparing him for the challenges ahead. It's a complex relationship, and while it's easy to view it through a black-and-white lens, there's a spectrum of gray that adds depth to the story. Lastly, the point about the protagonist saving lives and being punished for it is valid. However, this kind of moral ambiguity and character flaw is what makes characters more human and relatable. It's not a perfect system, and it's not a perfect world, which is often the point in such narratives. Let's agree to disagree on the interpretation of her actions, but I appreciate your fervor and the discussion it brings about. It's clear we both care deeply about the story and its characters.
"I would be lying if I said no, Master," William replied honestly. "Although I feel some resentment towards you, I will not forget that you treated me well over the past few years. I am very grateful to have become your disciple."
Fantasy · Elyon
it's Styx#9999.or maybe Stygian Styx now. not sure how the new change to discord tags work.
This is a great novel. You won't be disappointed. The author knows what they are doing, pays attention to the fans comments/Input and having 2 books with high rating proves it. If you came from the strongest system you won't be disappointed, it's a bit different but has a "skin" you might recognize. This is a lot different in that it feels like he's is more in a game world then the previous novels MC William was. It has a lot more star pages and game type prompts from the system lie quests, it has gatcha, etc
I'm not an experienced writer. I'm just testing the waters and hopefully I can get a story out. My grammar / punctuation is not the best. Sorry in advance. I wouldn't expect frequent updates. As I said I'm new to this. Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me know I gladly welcome any advice or tips.
This hurt to read, truly sad
And with that, she slit her throat. But Risea didn't scream. She steeled her nerves and kept on an expressionless face as the guards took her to the prince's carriage and entered it with her.
Eastern · BlackFlamer
I can't stop picturing her as a pokemon now lol. I know it's not the same name but its to close. Amber / Ember woulda been better IMHO.
Author's note - I have changed Amber's name to Mariel, who is a goddess of fire. Thank you Sue_D_Nymn for suggesting this name.
Eastern · BlackFlamer
I honestly don't like all the memory wipes.
"I altered their memories so they saw that I sacrificed a treasure to summon an 8th stage heaven spirit realm beast. The traitors died instantly and I told everyone that I have many more treasures. They don't remember about you having a 1st stage heaven spirit realm cultivation or about them dying and being resurrected again or practically everything that happened." Kai explained.
Eastern · BlackFlamer
This novel is undoubtedly one of the finest in the genre of adult literature that I’ve had the pleasure of reading. The author has done an exceptional job in developing the characters and crafting the romance. Surprisingly, the story itself is quite compelling, all things considered. While the adult content initially drew me in, it was the narrative that truly captivated me. It’s genuinely disheartening to see such a captivating novel on an extended hiatus.
Hick’s Harem
Realistic · uselessdegenerate