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nice chapter, hopefully we see Loki's party pov in the next chapter or the next, and btw John and his god meeting was insanely quick, it's not bad but if you ever think of doing a story rewrite add more to character introduction, and i beg don't use ai because it's take narrative and throws it in the trash by making sound like it coming from a professor in college and many fanfics and story's are ruined by ai
Great fanfic, good premise and all, but either run this through a spell checker and maybe create notes for future scenes and chapters before putting them and maybe take a week or two and create a stock pile of chapters (these ideas are from different creators, i take no original credit from this)
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A round of applause for Steve's graduation! 👏
Orario Records of Bastard Cheating Minecrafter
Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi
for course they would
He could only feel lucky that the Foundation was still so small, as everything he did just added more work to his table, like now as he was dealing with dozens of requests for nuking Wakanda and taking all their vibranium for Foundation use daily.
Marvel: The Foundation
Movies · Darkstar_crow
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'Though let's hope the Foundation can handle it on its own, might authorize for the use of SCP-005 if needed.' Alex thought as he sat back and felt a sudden desire to have a white cat in his lap while he sat in his secret underground bunker, planning to steal top-secret files from the world's most powerful spy organization.
Marvel: The Foundation
Movies · Darkstar_crow
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Neurolink System in the Modern World
Urban · InnocentFox
He reached down to check if his balls were still there and they were.
The Adeptus Custodes(DC)
Anime & Comics · A_Real_Werewolf234
one thing tho, Ed is mentally basically like 25-30,+his extra memorys, don't you think he would be at least more rational and not just sulk?
(A/N: Please remember they are teenagers. TEENAGERS! They act on impulse rather than rationality as they are still immature.)
Re:life with Karmic Gacha (Modern Family)
TV · Alittlepiggy33
well I'm not going to say i like it, but Damn I have an underdeveloped brain that finds this 'shit' funny enough that my throat actually hurts from holding my laughter back, but storyline is actually pretty good, hopefully we get multiple povs, and grammar is good, tho hopefully this novel doesn't become a good at the start then a AI generated mess at the end, keep it up (:
Rewriting6969
Fantasy · The_Thunder_Lord