I can neither confirm nor deny anything. xD
That's very relieving to hear! There's a lot planned for him, so it would've been a waste to kill him here. xD
Though some paragraphs could be broken up, the writing itself is digestible and not unnecessarily convoluted. The dialogue (which always the easiest to mess up) is fantastically crafted and clearly supports the defined personalities of each character. The author does a great job describing atmosphere. I FELT it during some of the situations Uriel got caught up in in the classroom.
xD. It'll happen
I'm glad to hear that! Thanks!
While this type of novel isn't really my cup of tea, it's important to note that's not for lack of well-crafted dialogue, bad flow, or anything along those lines. The story is very nicely crafted with an easily digestible writing style and nice imagery. Very nicely done. :)
Definitely a novel that's above "above average" lmao. The descriptions are in depth and enhanced by a wide variety of vocabulary. So far (as of chapter 4) I can't detect any "choppy" dialogue or long-winded info dumps that would detract from the story. Very well done!
The folly of the rich. It's when you're too safe that you're at your most vulnerable.
In her entire life, she had never seen her father beg. Their family was prideful and rich, and her father was so used to being on the top that he never looked down to heed the seriousness of his enemies.
The Demon Prince's Captive
Fantasy · TheLastRemnants
H-How you do this?! I want to do fancy stuff in my book too!
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The Demon Prince's Captive
Fantasy · TheLastRemnants
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original Heroes to Hunted
[The chapters are typically somewhat long for a webnovel (2000+ words) and the pacing is slow (sometimes overly so and I'm working on that). Only proceed if you like a slow burning but well fleshed out story with side characters that are more than just side-pieces to the MC. I explore them just as much as I do him.] "There are no heroes in war, only monsters." This was an outlook that Sato Katsuro, a man in service to the military, formed after being broken down by years of gore-filled battle. It was an outlook he took even to his grave, but what about beyond it? Transmigrated into a new land of fantasy and tasked to be the very thing he'd given up on becoming, Sato would have to fight a new war. A war between mankind and an oppressive enemy regime run by a cohort of demons. But, as Sato learned in his past, war wasn't always what it seemed. In war, truths were lies, friends were enemies, and the so-called heroes...they were often the villains. Additional Tags: Dark, realistic fantasy128 Chs 3.6k Collections
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Yin & Yang: Criminal Halves
"Just one last job." That's what Leo Reyes and Charlotte Bloom, a notorious couple with a thirst for crime, had in mind when robbing Quincy bank. Luckily for them, the heist went well. They neutralized the guards, stole enough for a lifetime fresh start, and rode the elevator down to freedom! They were ready for a new life together! A life of peace and quiet living! Sadly, that life was cut short as they rode down to their untimely deaths. However, death wasn't the end, as they were revived once more through forbidden magic. The price? Their freedom. Now the two lovers must navigate the chaotic streets of Quincy at the behest of their new master. All the while searching for a way to undo their bonds and break free from his control. Orcish warlords, elven hackers, and human supremacists; all these added to the hectic flavor that made the city of Quincy one of the most crime-ridden cities within the Bellonian Empire. Each of these and more would be an obstacle for our lovers. Yet, each would also further their goal of freedom. Will they ever break free and experience the freedom they yearn for? Or are they doomed to a life of sadness and servitude? Only time will tell...6 Chs 24 Collections
I really appreciate the review! Yeah, sorry about the paywall. If it means anything, I didn't lock the chapters for money. I hoped that by locking the chapters, the book would get more exposure/increase the reading base (because it'd be making a profit). Thanks for reading!
Heroes to Hunted
Fantasy · Sir_Killington