Greenbaypitbull

Greenbaypitbull

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I've always had stories in my head from when i was a little kid. from knights and wizards to super soldiers and space. im so excited to share them with you!

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
2 days ago
Replied to NinjaV2

nope, i was wrong. its 17,700

What neither of the Astartes knew, however, was that while they had been away, Qui-Gon had tested Anakin's blood for midi-chlorians. He was shocked to find that the boy had over twenty thousand midi-chlorians—a remarkable count. But he was even more surprised when, on a whim, he tested Nira's blood as well. She had fourteen thousand, significantly lower than the boy's, but still impressive.

Space Marine in Star Wars

Space Marine in Star Wars

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
3 days ago
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In all honesty, i was skeptical about this novel when i first started it. The addition of Ulbert made me hesitate, but once i started, i just couldn't stop. There was one moment that i didn't really like where Ainz was blamed for something i felt like he had no control over, by Pero while he was just out playing around. I dont feel like we got a good enough resolution to that, other than Ainz apologizing, which made me frustrated. HOWEVER! That one part came and went pretty quickly. The rest of the novel is beautifully written, and i love the aspects of gods veing a bigger part of this novel. the author has really outdone themselves once more with this novel. Bravo Author. Bravo.

Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
3 days ago
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i think he was 15k. maybe thats a little high, but i think thats right

What neither of the Astartes knew, however, was that while they had been away, Qui-Gon had tested Anakin's blood for midi-chlorians. He was shocked to find that the boy had over twenty thousand midi-chlorians—a remarkable count. But he was even more surprised when, on a whim, he tested Nira's blood as well. She had fourteen thousand, significantly lower than the boy's, but still impressive.

Space Marine in Star Wars

Space Marine in Star Wars

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
4 days ago
Replied to dleeh

It's been a couple of days, and this is kinda spot on. It's actually a lot of fun. I've been welding at my job for 2 years now, but i figured i might as well go get a degree so i can get more of that $$$

(A/N: Hello everyone, before we get into the chapter i need to update you all on the schedule for this book. Im going to be going back to school for Welding, which im looking forward to. Im still planning on releasing 3 chapters a week, but they might not be every Sunday, Tuesday, and Thursday/Friday. Just wanted you all to know!)

Space Marine in Star Wars

Space Marine in Star Wars

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
4 days ago
Replied to EdwinTr

yeah, you're right. i took down my comment

".....Love you too, dad," Bella says somewhat quietly and embarrassed. Though Charlie heard her and just smiled at her, as far as I'm aware this is the first time she told her father she loved him since we were kids. Which explains why Charlie seems about to tear up.

Reborn in Twilight as a Werebear

Reborn in Twilight as a Werebear

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
5 days ago
Replied to Hjalte_Andersen

Definitely

He was a monster. And this monster had said he was part of a group called the Ultramarines. If he was here, where are the others?

Space Marine in Star Wars

Space Marine in Star Wars

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
5 days ago
Replied to Loaded_Demigod29

oh 100% but remember, this is fantasy.

The fat Nobleman sputtered at the insult before Artoria's distorted voice cut through the tension.

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
5 days ago
Replied to Kyran_Ambrosius

i really appreciate that. I'll definitely ask if i do have any questions. im also always looking for people's opinion on how i can improve the story, so any criticisms are welcome as well!

Nira seemed to accept the answer without protest and skipped over to join Anakin, who Padmé—now the Queen—had kept close.

Space Marine in Star Wars

Space Marine in Star Wars

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
5 days ago
Replied to Kyran_Ambrosius

im honestly not sure. i dont want to make him super OP for the stories sake, but i want it to be satisfying. what do you think?

Nira seemed to accept the answer without protest and skipped over to join Anakin, who Padmé—now the Queen—had kept close.

Space Marine in Star Wars

Space Marine in Star Wars

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Greenbaypitbull
Greenbaypitbull
6 days ago
Replied to Kyran_Ambrosius

yes, Anakin will be super OP within limits. im just saying that the Warp would act like the Force, where you have to have an aptitude for it. Anakin won't have the best aptitude for it since he will be extremely strong in the force. im just doing some balancing within the two universes

Nira seemed to accept the answer without protest and skipped over to join Anakin, who Padmé—now the Queen—had kept close.

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Space Marine in Star Wars

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