write what you wanna write man! I honestly thought this story was dropped but I'm glad you picked it back up, this is definitely one of the good ones. thanks for the chapter!
thanks for the chapter! loved the PoV of his kids and an explanation of the powers his kids inherited from him as well! keep up the good work!
one of sages powers is (low)biokinesis which can be used to become ageless, or at the very least keep his body at his prime indefinitely. I'm hoping that with the addition of giants/children/dragons blood alothough he doesn't have to get super OP powers like growing 13 feet tall, but more along the lines of acquiring the bone and muscle density of a giant, gaining the attunement to nature and animals from the children, and maybe even getting a bit of inherent magic and fire immunity from the dragons since its heavily implied dragons breath magic in ASOIAF. ^.^
I honestly love all your FF's, unfortunately I've noticed you have a bad habit of dropping them when they hit around 20 chapters or so. please don't drop this one, although the first part was a bit weird with how you wrote it, its gotten so much better. I look forward to reading more ^.^. thanks for the chapter! I wouldn't mind reading more about his interactions with his children considering they've all inherited certain aspects of his powers. another part is how you hinted at how he can acquire new powers through genetics and blood using his Biokinesis you should think about getting some giant blood/ dragon blood/ and children of the forest blood so he can acquire different powers and characteristics from them! thanks again!
really like the story, the only thing I have a hang up on is how spoiled he acts with his system. there's been a few instances where he whines to the system like a child even though he's getting pretty much free power from it. other than that I like the idea of him being hunted down by other transmigrators just make sure he gets rewards for it. and maybe even give quests for him to hunt down transmigrators in future worlds, that seems fun! thanks again for the chapters!
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