Lopy_2424

The story looks promising i didn’t notice big writing problems but i also didn’t look for them the story i realy found new and i am interested in what the author will do with this story

I find the system to strange and the author made it to op and the Mac just does not use it well I find it boring how it is just not realistic and I found the story uninteresting

I find it problematic that the main character is a spycopath that just instantly likes to kill people it feels a hollow If a high born was so important why doesn’t the empire react it just gives a small discount I think this is a mod story