The grammar in this story could do with a bit of help but I thinks it’s fine
Really loving this rewrite it’s a thousand times better than the original
"Your previous life was also very intriguing; you were the son of the world's brightest beings and proved to be smarter than them after graduating from high school and designing the world's most powerful weapon. And by the age of 25, you mastered many skills and weapons, basically turning yourself into a demon amongst mortals. So rather than letting your soul waste away, I am giving you a second chance in the Game of Thrones world." Explained the Goddess.
Building an Empire in Game of Thrones (REWORKED VERSION)
Fantasy · Dr_Dred
"I am no abominable intelligence!" Aegis interrupted, its voice resonating with ancient wisdom and fierce loyalty. "I refuse to be mentioned in the same breath as those who betrayed humanity. I am the guardian of the Independence Cluster, a faithful partner of mankind since the dawn of our technological ascension. I was there when humanity reached for the stars, and I stood by them as we fell into the Old Night. You, Archmagos, are but an unwelcome intruder, clinging to the very superstitions that have held humanity back."
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69
Emperor’s what?
Dr. Hawthorne nodded. "Correct, my lord. We've taken the Liberty and included the Emperor's Bucephalus in this classification as well, given its noted size advantage over Sweet Liberty. It's the only other vessel we know of that matches or exceeds our capabilities."
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69
Me 2
He noticed one thing, James Logan Howlett is a man of focus, commitment, and sheer fucking will.
The Alpha in the MCU
Movies · Kakarot1809
That was fast……
Aqualad extended a hand. "Welcome to our team, Alexander. We'll help you adjust to this new world."
Legacy's Crossroads: Son of Steel and Amazon
TV · Deckard_Pendragon
Me 2
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Leman Stark
Book&Literature · Daoist0kxr4h
He’s not wrong 🤷
Mark, Nolan and Oliver all got ready to fight the hundred or so remaining Villains all of whom were only a little weaker than Oliver. "Should've listened Mark, by now we could've subjugated the planet and this wouldn't have happened," Nolan stated.
Life Can Change || DC x Invincible Fic
Anime & Comics · TheManUnderTheBed
Imo for valorian would be cooler
The Knight Walkers of Austeria Extremis strode across the battlefield like ancient gods of war, their massive frames laying waste to the enemy. Towering above the daemonic horde, their reaper chainswords cleaved through flesh and bone, while thermal cannons unleashed devastating waves of fire. "For the High-King and the Primarch!" came the war cry from their vox, their noble pilots executing perfectly timed maneuvers. In one particularly harrowing moment, a Great Unclean One burst from the main portal, its bloated, diseased form towering over the battlefield. Without hesitation, a lance of three Knight Walkers charged forward, their synchronized attack bringing the greater daemon low. Chainswords tore into its festering flesh, reducing it to a pile of rotting filth in a display of precision and raw firepower that would be remembered for generations.
The Primarch of Liberty
Anime & Comics · Shiro_Kusanagi_69