Lack of reading comprehension. Anyway, I'm not here to nag. Sorry for being so temperamental. It's your story, I liked it at first, then I was disappointed by its development and now I don't care. Good luck 🍀🤞, may you succeed.
Do what you want, it's your story, but you're being obtuse in this regard: 1- Who would question that so and so is using magic, if in westeros magic is nothing but mythology except in the North, beyond the Wall and Essos? On top of that, there is no evidence to prove that the protagonist uses magic, there goes that nerf excuse (the most one could argue here is foul play, but in the end there would be no tangible proof of anything). 2- I see you greatly underestimate the magic of a Skinchanger even a novice one: as long as there is an animal in play, be the horse the case in this matter, then no normal person would be a match for him, it's simple logic, his control over his mount is superhuman, almost perfect. He may fail in the jousting technique, but we both know that the protagonist is not bad at it, the opposite would be an excuse, he may not be the best by far in that technique, however, this is compensated by his magic, it is simple 1+1 (the second 1 being an inhuman ability). There is no comparison between what a warg can do and what a normal person can do. You have to put the power levels in order otherwise there is no way to understand it.
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Well, the only moot point would be to crossover with this universe. It would simply destroy the cult completely. The whole rhythm of the cult building would go out the window. The story would lose its depth: it would become a digression in itself: a let's see how I put this together with that. It's not worth the effort in my opinion. It won't turn out well: building the foundations is very important since time immemorial. As for the protagonist having another partner: wouldn't that be too cumbersome? It would add drama to the plot, yes, no doubt, but little else. Although the latter is not too important, really. Not when the future of the cult takes a dark turn with no apparent return. There will be mass desertion here, for sure. Please keep tradition above experimentation, master.
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That is a very good perspective. It will add personality to the plot.
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original Yu-Gi-Oh GX: Ryuto's Path! (Dropped)
Kanazaki Ryuto, a depressed young man burdened by the circumstances life has dealt him, suddenly and without apparent explanation, finds himself in a strange reality where everything around him seems to exist in two dimensions, like in a cartoon. To make matters even stranger, the boy now attends some kind of remote academy in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, an institution where it's the norm to teach its students how to play a peculiar card game, a card game that Ryuto quickly recognizes as the one called "Duel Monsters" from the animated series: Yu-Gi-Oh! GX. In this rather anticlimactic manner, Ryuto, mostly a taciturn and negative being, discovers a new purpose in life apart from the pessimistic trope, 'everything is a disaster waiting to happen,' a spark to give it his all, to find his way back home, because if there's one thing Ryuto is convinced of, it's that escaping from reality is never the answer to anything, even if the fantasy he's experiencing may seem so grand. A/N: Read at your own risk. I recommend checking the tags below beforehand to avoid any misunderstandings. Disclaimer: I have no intention of profiting from this work, it is just a fanfiction that I write to practice my writing and want to share with like-minded individuals. Consequently, updates will be made at my discretion. [The distribution rights for Yu-Gi-Oh belong solely to Konami Digital Entertainment].12 Chs 132 Collections
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Yu-Gi-Oh DM: Re-Duel! (Dropped)
A man is forcefully taken out of his reality by an unknown entity. Follow his story as he tries everything in his power to return home, to be with his loved ones. A/N: Read at your own risk. I recommend checking the tags below beforehand to avoid any misunderstandings. Disclaimer: I have no intention of profiting from this work, it is just a fanfiction that I write to practice my writing and want to share with like-minded individuals. Consequently, updates will be made at my discretion. [The distribution rights for Yu-Gi-Oh belong solely to Konami Digital Entertainment].23 Chs 137 Collections
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Dragonborn Conqueror SI (ASOIAFxElder Scrolls)
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