SunnysMoroseShadow

SunnysMoroseShadow

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Likes to read. That’s why I’m here.

2022-10-06 Joined Global
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SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
10 days ago
Commented

For the last two chapters the overuse of pretentious language has been distracting and broken immersion in the story. Jane Austen wrote in a more direct manner than the current author. Perhaps I am the only one bothered by this, but just wanted to share my experience as hopefully constructive feedback.

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
10 days ago
Commented

also you don’t have the same body. The tolerance built up in a prior life would not exist in this body!

A realization dawned upon her – she had grown accustomed to indulging in alcohol due to the frequent outings with her former colleagues in her past life. As a result, her tolerance had steadily risen over time. However, in her present world, such a habit would likely attract severe judgment for a lady of noble standing such as herself.

The Villainess's Secret Bedroom Service

The Villainess's Secret Bedroom Service

Fantasy · yoojee

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
10 days ago
Commented

Share, my guy, and we can be friends

To her surprise, the nocturnal intruder turned out to be none other than Damien Dio, the duke himself, caught red-handed with a large glass bottle of alcohol and a piece of hard cheese. He stood frozen, akin to a guilty criminal apprehended in the act, unable to gather his thoughts and fully comprehend the unfolding situation.

The Villainess's Secret Bedroom Service

The Villainess's Secret Bedroom Service

Fantasy · yoojee

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
16 days ago
Commented

?? Why was that amusing??

She chuckled in amusement and went ahead to the kitchen.

Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise

Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise

Urban · Llaellen

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
16 days ago
Commented

Again, why the hell was her wish to stay with this guy? He’s in love with someone else for like a decade. Get some self respect.

Obviously this was still Susan, somehow Susan's family became rich and she could stand beside Cyrus with such background.

Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise

Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise

Urban · Llaellen

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
16 days ago
Commented

I don’t understand why she would want to stay with someone who was in love with someone else for 8+ years on top of being really mean to her. What does she see in him? She obviously didn’t get close to him in those 8 years so why is her wish to stay??

In the 8 years of marriage, the only reason Amanda didn't want divorce was because she knew her son would go after his lover.

Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise

Rebirth: Stubbornly Fufilling A Promise

Urban · Llaellen

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
22 days ago
Commented

I like that they seem to get along. I hope it stays that way

Cataleya was grinning at Ruby and patted her head like an adoring big sister should be.  "You're rather cute than expected. And no, I won't be coming because I want to give you space to adjust and just ignore people if they compare us both. Probably it's all negative words about me but hey, I'm not that bad."

That Tyrant Duke is a Werewolf

That Tyrant Duke is a Werewolf

Fantasy · sparrow101

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
22 days ago
Commented

No thank you. You already don’t care what happens to her, you’ve already discarded her.

"Just stay where I can see you." He just said and Cataleya hated how her heart fluttered at that.

That Tyrant Duke is a Werewolf

That Tyrant Duke is a Werewolf

Fantasy · sparrow101

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
22 days ago
Commented

Honestly, good for Sasha for being honest with her.

Sasha sighed, turned away from them and went to the door. Before she exited, she faced to her side. "I apologize. Please excuse me for a moment."

That Tyrant Duke is a Werewolf

That Tyrant Duke is a Werewolf

Fantasy · sparrow101

SunnysMoroseShadow
SunnysMoroseShadow
22 days ago
Commented

Umm murdering a lot of people is a pretty big flaw. Even if they are “bad” people. And she was acting as a villainess in her past, so she might reasonably conclude that he might consider her bad.

The duke almost had no flaws at all. Someone as handsome as he was, tall and graceful, she should be glad that she wasn't betroth to some old guy with money. But her dreams really terrified her. It felt like a premonition that she'd die in his hands with one mistake.

That Tyrant Duke is a Werewolf

That Tyrant Duke is a Werewolf

Fantasy · sparrow101