Yeah, she will ;)
There will be a time for that sweet, sweet vengeance >:)
[NU FREAKING UH. NO. YOUR NAME IS ELLIANOR. DON'T EVEN THINK OF SAYING OTHERWISE. WELL, BACK TO THE BRAWL. STOP. MESSING. AROUND]
Sci-fi · Laziest_Pillow
The amount of coping...
'If he hadn't believed me, would I have still gotten points for that? In that case, it doesn't only depend on my actions... I guess the result is always a part of it. Like -Killing-. Attempted murder wouldn't... Or would I just get fewer Points? Wait... It's not murder, I'm defending myself. But I did follow them... Tsk. I'm just getting rid of problems before they come back! Nothing villainous about that!'
Fantasy · Adam_K47xx
The Goddess thing felt more like a plot device than a character, but well, it is only chapter 2. Let's see how things unfold.
"Those who make the ultimate sacrifice will never know if they succeeded in their sacrifice, only have Faith that those he protected would succeed." - A random comment I read on a youtube video
"So you're not even sure that you actually saved them."
Fantasy · Adam_K47xx
It seems like an interesting start. I liked some of the nerd stuff at the beginning like the mention of how much data was in the cafe, and how little the MC starts with in the matter of stats. The writing is cohesive and has a nice flow, you won't get lost through it and can understand the scenes quite easily, with no need to scroll up and down to understand a sentence or a passage. Overall, a nice start for the novel.
A trillion of a gigabyte equals 1.000.000 petabytes, one million petabytes. If it has trillions of gigabytes, and not just a singular one, it is on the house of millions of petabytes I went to search, and one trillion gigabytes is one zetabyte. The internet is estimated to be around 175 zetabytes in space. It means that the game has a sizable fraction of today's internet total space. Ignore it, it is just nerd talk since the numbers tickled my brain.
He navigated through the trillions of gigabytes of data, searching for Leon, but found nothing, leaving the boy even more confused.
Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel
"Slow as a snail, HP of a fly! Missed an input! Now I d1e!"
[Endurance: 1]
Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel
That's one fancy name.
[Title: Third Son of King George Astrahart]
Fantasy · One_Winged_Angel
I will keep that in mind ;D
SHADE - THOSE WHO WANT TO BE ASSASSINS, WALK IN THE SHADE AND KILL IN THE SHADOWS.
Transmigrated with the Void Slayer System
Sci-fi · Laziest_Pillow