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10 days ago
Replied to P_R_9758

Thank you very much. I won't drop the novel, but I may make it into multiple books.

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1 months ago
Replied to _nameless_monster_

No. There are some supernatural things in the novel but not magic.

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2 months ago
Replied to TheprimordialGod

I only did it because it felt weird having Alfred date and marry someone from the world when he was around 40-50 in his old world. Then I got to have him first of being betrothed to a 12-year-old and thats weird to write and try and think anything for. At least Isra is mentally older so it was easier for me to write.

"Wait!" Alfred stopped as Isra ran next to him. "Never tell anyone about us. If they find out, we're both dead." It was a whisper in his ear. Alfred pulled back and looked at her. The seriousness that was easily readable on her face told of first-hand experience. He gave a small nod, leaving the room. 

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2 months ago
Replied to H_hali

Fair enough. I get where your coming from but I need her in the story simple beacuse she is the main antagonist for Alfred. At the end of the day some people will like her others not but she is not someone I can just skip over. She will appear later again as there is a arc around her but she is not the lone focus in it and I have toned down a little on her.

Helga stood outside the tent off the ancient one. It was the only one who braved the journey across the ocean, saying it was their fate to be here. "Come in." Helga's hesitation was broken by the old withered voice of the old being. Helga took a deep breath. She knew that they were eccentric beings and anyone who met one always walked on eggshells whenever they did. 

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2 months ago
Replied to H_hali

Ravens brother.

Behind Raven who looked at the camp with an emotionless stare, Charles sat watching like a predator. He was playing with one of his axes, waiting. The moonlight shone between the trees, and he knew it was almost time to begin the raid. A man rode next to Raven, whispering something in his ear. With a slight nod, Raven turned around and made a couple of hand gestures before riding out the trees. Fifty horses followed behind him, charging towards the Commonwealth camp. 

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3 months ago
Replied to Romance_guy

I did have something in mind like that but it requires a lot of work to get to that stage and have it make sense in a medieval world. The current geopolitical politics in our world are built on many modern technologies that would be impossible to recreate such as WMDs. It is possible to recreate something similar but it will be very hard without a lot of work and justification for certain things to happen. I know my comment is kinda vague about Alfred's goals and future but I don't want to spoil the story for you as what I really want to say would be too much of a giveaway. But as you have implied, Alfred's story is about control. I need to fine-tune how that will look but I do have a couple of things in mind, some along the lines of our current geopolitics. I'm sorry this is so vague but I don't want to spoil things for you and any reader that sees this.

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3 months ago
Replied to Volkov

It should be. I have done this so that it's easily discernable when he changes his role in the future. It is just one of those things where it's best not to look into it too deeply.

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3 months ago
Replied to Cum_in

Not entirely. Think about the military as a powerful organisation. If William retires and a new position has to be picked and a beloved leader is overlooked for the postion in place of someone else simply because of rank you would have a major problem on hand. We’ve seen this multiple times in our history prime example being the Roman Empire during the year of 4 Emporers.

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3 months ago
Replied to Cum_in

For the stragglers part, yh I agree. But at the same time, it's not something really worth writing about. Yeah they exist but do I need to dedicate words to how they go around and hunt them? I felt not. As for Halfdan, I see it in the way that no wanted posters go up because if you Alfred could you imagine him staying in a new land where he has nothing instead of going home? All he knows so far is that Halfdan is working with Helga, there is no reason to assume that would change.

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    The Reborn King

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE DARK TRANSMIGRATION KINGDOMBUILDING CONQUER ROYALFAMILY NO-HAREM MULTIPLELEADS NOCHEATS

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    Alfred, a history teacher on Earth is suddenly thrown into the body of Prince Alfred Lindonfall, the twelve-year-old prince and heir to the throne of the Kingdom of Ammar. With the abrupt death of his father, the responsibility to rule a Kingdom falls on his shoulders. Having to navigate a medieval court and world, his journey to creating an empire and putting his knowledge into practice sees him become a man he never knew he could be, being shaped by the new world and unique circumstances he faces. There are many characters who get a lot of focus and can be called a lead in their own right, but I won't put their character descriptions in as it would be too much of a spoiler for chapters in future. Cover Art: not mine so here is the credit. https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/351912463658203/

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