Bro, great story. One of the stories that pulled me in seamlessly. I luv TP as a show. In my mind its the best. I especially love the Preda King. My fav.
KAZUHIME is like Naruto.
Amazing story, I like the pace of the story as well. The powerups for the MC do not feel forced but something the MC worked hard for using his golden finger. Hopefully, MC will fuse his current technique to a high Earth level soon, because from what I read in the novel Low Earth and High Earth rank techniques have a lot of differences in power.
I think buying or getting hold of a chakra blade is very useful to increase the MC's lethality.
Welcome back. In the Land of Lightning, there is Genbu an Island Turtle, and the chunin exams for Land of Lightning are conducted there. Could the MC see whats that's about, it always intrigued me in the anime, like the Lion turtles from avatar.
Bro, I really like the story, but you have to decrease the AI story-writing stuff. It has an unnatural and very robotic feel to it. Write how to want it to be not how the AI chat bot decides how it's going to be.
Great Story. In SL fanfics, innate-level MC's always rush to get spirit rings without practicing with their Martial souls. Great work.
His Main weapon is Sword?
Hi, that was me just ranting, after reading a whole lot of bad SL fanfics. In every soul land FF Dugu Bo and his family get rodded in every way and left in the dust or MC lusting for Dugu Yan, There seems to be no FF's they they are left alone or just considered to be partners, always a bodyguard or secretly stealing for the garden or directly threatening him with Dugu Yans life.
'Besides, the herbs in the Ice and Fire Yin Yang Well mostly carry ice and fire attributes, and their medicinal properties are estimated to be aggressive, so they are not very suitable for conditioning the body. Ye Lingling's Nine Heart Flowering Apple Martial Soul isn't omnipotent, so its healing effect should be limited. And I can't use the Octagonal Mysterious Ice Grass and Infernal Delicate Apricot. If I want to safely strip away the poison, and then heal those dark injuries that have been accumulated for many years in Dugu Bo's body, I think I still have to use ordinary medicinal herbs to do it. Hmm, I have to take the time to think about what medicinal herbs I should look for to combine and match.'
I, Cut down Douluo, without Spirit Skills
Book&Literature · Crazy_DarkSide_Cat
Bro, I like DD fanfics, hope to see it soon.
But it's not all bad news! Let me know if you're interested in reading my second DD2 project. If we reach at least 10 comments expressing interest, I'll start publishing chapters on this platform on that same October 7th.
BTTH: From Genius to Invincible
Book&Literature · Kisshot