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Thank you for the support man 😁. I'll do my best and never stop! Today better than yesterday, and tomorrow better than today!

Yo man! Thanks for taking your time to read and review the story! I really appreciate the support 🥰

The story is pretty good, offering a unique perspective on the apocalyptic setting.The writing is good, making the reading not slurred and aim very dynamic, and everything else is in an interesting spot.The only problem I had was in the first few chapters, when the author made the narrator of the story just narrate the scene instead of describing it. This at the beginning may end up disturbing the reader's experience with the story, but at that point it doesn't matter because this issue is corrected in the next chapters.So keep writing, your story has good potential!