Hey, I think you should consider writing on Fiction.live as well. I believe you'd fit in there quite well, and the live interaction and chat features would help you improve even further as a writer. Of course, that's just my opinion
I agree. I think a style that's subtle enough to stay mysterious, yet clear enough to convey what's happening, would be perfect.
Actually, I have a question. I'm happy with the way the story is going right now, but I feel like Veritas is being a bit too passive. Even though the system wants terror, the smaller incidents are enough for now. Still, I think it would be better if he caused a much larger event, especially to trigger a new wave of growth in his power. That way, if the Avengers suddenly decide to target him, he'd at least be more prepared for it
Just a comment suggestion: Hey Veritas, next time—or whenever you feel like it—have Gwen's mask come off and show the public's reaction to her
Perfect
Shameless author’s note: This fanfic is an idea I’ve had in my mind for a long time, but to be honest, it’s more of a passion project, so there probably won’t be regular updates. I also know that using AI might turn some people away, but since I’m a new writer and English isn’t my native language, I use AI as a supportive tool. Still, I’ll do my best to make it as unnoticeable as possible.
3 billion tons, bro. Do you have any idea how massive that is?
Creating fan fiction for a cult classic like Naruto that doesn’t align with the logic of the original universe can feel disrespectful. That’s why reacting negatively to that kind of fan work can be a justified response.
Tfft
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original DC: THE IMPOSSIBILITY ENGINE
Velrox, in a dark universe, is an ordinary being until a mysterious power awakens within him and changes everything. As this power grows, reality begins to bend around him, and Velrox is no longer just a human but an anomaly that disrupts the balance of the universe. Whether those who try to stop him are truly his enemies or already part of his story is something no one can ever be certain of.___________________________ I am a new writer, and I don’t mind saying that I use artificial intelligence as a supportive tool. This is an idea I’ve had in mind for a long time, but it’s more of a passion project, so there won’t be regular updates.3 Chs 5 Collections
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