This was brutal and yet so amazing, kee it up author this is good
mc is so boring and all he does it watch other people do great things, there is no notable things about him and he isnt anything special, he just exists.
this is boring im dropping
let me guess its a martial arts person guiding them LOL
"I tried to stop him, so don't blame me". She spoke to the air, and walked into one of the straw houses.
Fantasy · wokkajun
just because hes aware doesnt make it better, its still an annoying trope to deal with
I shouldn't have made that promise. with Yon Why did i get attached so fast? She reminded of myself when I was younger.
Fantasy · wokkajun
finally, a weak mc would have been SO annoying.
Now the problem of getting stronger, is not a problem anymore.
Fantasy · wokkajun
this is so lame, they just randomly introduced some random kid and now i can already see where this is going, the girl is probably gonna be in MCs party and is going to be so annoying.
That mistake costed her life, and I broke my promise. But the Yon of this world is not dead yet, and I still haven't made that promise.
Fantasy · wokkajun
why is everybody else OP and MC is just a weakling????
"I am so sorry."
Fantasy · wokkajun
This is a really good story, if you are thinking about reading this just read it it’s really good, PS author please don’t drop this this is so good.
This book has been deleted.
This is so good
Die to begin
Fantasy · Hylp