interesting name choice
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seems spooky so far
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oh future
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thank you very much
so far it seems to have a good foundation hopefully you expand upon it further in future chapters i think you had some good ideas in this [img=recommend]
i can tell where your taking this and its not my cup of tea but you do you
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Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse
Fantasy · MooingNymph
this plot is a little strange to me
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Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse
Fantasy · MooingNymph
a bit straight forward as a description for the memory surge also you didn't need to add the last bit
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Surviving the Apocalypse in the Multiverse
Fantasy · MooingNymph
hi author review here hopefully you like the first chapter this is the second story ive written so please tell me what you like or dislike [img=recommend]
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original Obelisk and Elysium
There exists a place where hero's go to die. Climb the Obelisk and obtain power beyond your wildest dreams.8 Chs 2 Collections
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THE DEPTHS
Curiosity is the greatest sin of mankind, when we found the oceans abyss we should have just turned back.0 Chs 2 Collections
- original
Gourmet Divinity
A galaxy and the mystery's that lay beyond devouring all that comes in your way at least it tastes good.0 Chs 4 Collections
have fun if you read it i personally hope that i can continue to write a great story and create a wonderful world filled with all sorts of oddities and tastes if you enjoy it then ill be happy
Gourmet Divinity
Sci-fi · practicaloctopi