It's quite good from pacing to world building but the grammar isn't that polished. There's a lot more improvement. However, the plot itself hooked me. I also like the diverse races in the world. All in all, it's quite enjoyable to read and I'm looking forward to more releases.
did you guys reach the last chapter???
I'll continue this soon after my bullshit OJT...
Hmmm... Well, if he loses with his si many stacked talents. then he should just commit suicide. maybe 4-5 major realms with rich combat experience he might lose
'Fortunately, I'm now at the peak of the power ceiling. No matter what schemes or conspiracies are hidden beneath. My absolute power could crush them!'
Games · DaoistSeniorWhite
Hmmm... Well, if he loses with his si many stacked talents. then he should just commit suicide. maybe 4-5 major realms with rich combat experience he might lose
'Fortunately, I'm now at the peak of the power ceiling. No matter what schemes or conspiracies are hidden beneath. My absolute power could crush them!'
Games · DaoistSeniorWhite
yeah, I've been a lot thoughtless lately due to academics sched 😆. I'll find time to correct the inconveniences (if I get free time) in one fell swoop
Space: 81%. Wind: 11% Earth: 11% Gold: 11% Wood: 11% Water: 11% Time: 0.1%
Games · DaoistSeniorWhite
I've been uploading one chapter for a while. I have at least 15 chapters stockpiled, maybe I'll post it when there's an event or something on the Webnovel
'A meteorite? I must pay a visit there later.' Dylan sent this to Jericho. How could he miss an opportunity to increase his space law?
Games · DaoistSeniorWhite
I think not. He's just a bigger ant for those in the Heavenly Realm. But in the mortal realm, yes, he's indeed op as fuck 🗿
yes, I miswrote 💀
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Games · DaoistSeniorWhite
Did it work?
The Strongest Body Customization System
Fantasy · MadScythe