Shahinaz_Kemal

Shahinaz_Kemal

female LV 2

a beginner writer and teenager who learns grade 11 level in highschool

2022-08-09 Joined Global
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Shahinaz_Kemal
2 years ago
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okay the front gates get knocked and because of the person who knocked the door who is the postman ....angel and ash life is going to change....its just a life changing coins

It was a sunny day, Ash was working as usual, and Angel is in her room shopping the latest trends of clothing on internet. Her dad was out on a meeting. Suddenly, the front gate knocks from where Ash and Angel life is going to change upside down.

The Witness;The black rose

The Witness;The black rose

Teen · Shahinaz_Kemal

Shahinaz_Kemal
Shahinaz_Kemal
2 years ago
Replied to Serenity_AJ

okay thank u I edited it...continue helping like that ...its really helpful from u ...thank u so much

Shahinaz_Kemal
Shahinaz_Kemal
2 years ago
Replied to Serenity_AJ

can u write for me the sentence so that I can explain it for u?

It was a sunny day, Ash was working as usual, and Angel is in her room shopping the latest trends of clothing on internet. Her dad was out on a meeting. Suddenly, the front gate knocks from where Ash and Angel life is going to change upside down.

The Witness;The black rose

The Witness;The black rose

Teen · Shahinaz_Kemal

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    The Witness;The black rose

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    The Black Rose He was a gardener, his name was Ashton, most of the time he was called Ash, and he was an experienced in fragrances of flowers especially in roses. He stayed and worked in the same place, which means he lived and at the same time he worked by taking care of the big nice garden of the house. The owner of the house was so wealthy, his wife died in a car accident leaving him with his 14 years old daughter Angelina, mostly called Angel. Now she is 22, a university student and have got friends, she drives her own shiny white car and wears whatever she wants. She was beautiful, funny, intelligent and lovely. She loves everyone and everyone loved her. Her father Mr. Henry is an owner of many companies, listed in the richest persons record. But even if he is rich, he loves and helps needy people. And his goal in life is to make Angel happy all the time. He gives all his love and care for her. He never thought of letting another woman to take care of her. In fact Ash was not there when Angel mom was alive. He was given his job after 2 years after Angel’s mom death. He was older than Angel by a year. When they were small, they used to play together only when Angel’s dad was not in home and that was rare for a dad taking care of his lonely daughter. They stopped playing with each other when they were around 18. At that time Ash used to work more and to sit alone with the big and wide garden and from which he developed his knowledge in botany. He lived in a small room and he eats what the family gave him. Angel gave him some books about plants. Her dad also gave him some of his old unwanted clothes. Every morning Ash wakes up and starts trimming the plants and trees, removed spiny thorns, took care and water them especially the roses. Every morning while he works he sees Angel when she goes to her university. They have stopped talking to each other since 2 years. And everything was closed...

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