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Last sentences: Miura had always kept himself under control. (Himself = Herself)

Miura's eyes rolled in reflex, how could this man's feeling be so strong? Because I don't want to make everyone suspicious. Miura dared to lift her head and try to look like Herra. "What do you mean? Of course, I'm Herra." Miura said even though her lips were trembling slightly. This man had almost gotten his way, but fortunately, Miura had always kept himself under control.

Who The Villain

Who The Villain

Fantasy · Eva_Yunita_9816

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Sis, why is this "he and not she", for Herra or Miura? Both of them is a girl, right? Isn't it supposed "She and herself"?

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Who The Villain

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Yes, it is minim dialogue, but good.

ch 0 1 INTRODUCTION 1(The beginning of the end - Genesis)

*Survival* dropped.

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Eastern · alu_sachi

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Sorry, what is this?😁

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