I love how you have portrayed grief and loss in a realistic way. The first three chapters establish the theme very early on, and I can't help but feel sorry for the main character. I really enjoy the romanticism and sadness this story feeds to the viewer. I very much enjoyed reading this novel!
After the first couple of chapters I waw already hooked! Magenta's ability is very interesting and I really wonder what the limits of it are. I really hate the mother character already for making Magenta's life a living helll. I can't wait to see what's next!
This story has a deep and romantic feeling to it, the opening chapter really set the scene of the world in a way that I truly enjoyed . I usually don't read novels of this genre, but this one is great and I definitely recommend that people give it a read. 5 out of 5 rating! This is some quality writing and I loved every second of it.
So far I'm 7 chapters in and I'm loving this story. The transition from the regular an entirely different fantasy world truly felt like I was entering a whole new place. Your descriptions of the characters and environments form a picture of each one. I feel concern and stress for the main character Gala, and I want to see her succeed at returning to her normal. There are only small parts of the story that could use a little proofreading, but they were almost unnoticeable and didn't take away from the experience. Overall I love this story!
I appreciate the honest feedback it will help me get better at writing . I've been working to improve my writing with each chapter. I'll definitely try to improve the dialogue tags to make the conversations easier to follow. Thanks for the review! and I'm glad you enjoyed.
It's a mystery that will be revealed later on in the story, her age will be somewhat important.
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Unnecessary Capes
Action · AntiTeoSensai
I can't wait for the next chapter, it's started to get interesting. I wonder how this "agreement" will work out in the end. He seems to be up to something.
I love the direction this story is going in! 5 chapters went by so quickly reading this series, and I definitely plan on continuing reading this novel. I love how the werewolf society operates!
The concept is very interesting! I'm already three chapters in and I plan to catch up on this series, Demonic rising has a dark atmosphere, and it works great with the themes of the story.
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original Unnecessary Capes
A young boy named Brakus, loses his father at a young age and struggles to come to terms with it, while simultaneously trying to keep the way he died a secret. Brakus realized that heroics are Unnecessary and he will only save those he loves, "Capes aren't necessary they are only for show." This is Unnecessary Capes.26 Chs 10 Collections
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Another Reincarnation? Seriously?
A Reincarnation story with a twist! Hanma revives in the body of another being. Along with a mysterious lady they set out on an epic quest that seems straightforward, but nobody could've guessed what they had in store.5 Chs 6 Collections
I love the world building so far , it makes me want to see where you go with the concepts that you introduced in the first chapter 🙂
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Fantasy · Juri_Reiza