Thank you for the feedback and glad you enjoyed it!
Hello, just to clarify, Long Hao spent two extra weeks there after falling down the ravine so he cultivated up to that level since he now had an inheritance and better cultivation roots. Hope this clarified your question. And thank you for the feedback!
Soon two weeks passed until one day Gu Lingxin got feedback from his ghosts saying that Long Hao had left the ravine; if he had to guess Long Hao's current strength, then he'd most likely be at around the second or third stage of foundation establishment.
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Well, this is just the start of him hunting protagonists, so the protagonist isn't even aware that he's being plotted against him as of right now but there will be protagonists in the future that will give lots of trouble to the MC. Also, the system isn't fully explained yet but it will be soon, and so will the protagonists. He will also suffer setbacks in the future, but I do understand where you're coming from, this won't be a typical novel where MC just casually wipes the ground with all the protagonists. Thank you for your feedback!
This is the original, hope you enjoy it!
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Yes, I'll be publishing a few chapters soon. Thank you for the support! :)
MC won't really be like that, he is only repaying a favor to his so-called aunt because he views her as his mother in this world, he also did say that as long as it doesn't put his life in risk. Thank you for the feedback! :)
True, I just made the hair white because I'm associating yin with souls and so on, you're right though :)
All of a sudden, he felt his blood boiling as if he were burning from the inside, yet he felt chills entering his body, seeping deep into his bones; his bones started to transform slowly, his bones now had a dark lustre whilst his hair grew and slowly turned white because of the yin from his bloodline, his face grew more handsome, his looks now were enough to make him a model if he was back on Earth, his original eyes turned into light blue, and his gaze became piercing cold, his already lean body got leaner and more muscular, he also grew to be one-metre forty centimetres in height.
Fantasy · Aspect_x
I won't make the MC evil as in just a psychopath that only knows how to kill; I've tried to portray him as someone that will kill someone if it benefits him, the whole villain thing is related to fate itself and would make more sense at the end of the novel since it's where I'll clarify it however I understand where you're coming from. Thank you for the feedback!
This protagonist is kind of like the tutorial boss, but don't worry since the future protagonists won't be taken down so easily. The MC had many advantages over this protagonist from the start such as knowing the future and his system as well as his position in the sect, future protagonists won't be killed by the MC so easily.
A Villain's Fate
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