I know right. I honestly cannot begin to guess a way to reach people. Thanks anyway for reading it.
Thanks dude. I appreciate it.
First of all, if he was me he would actually be more perverted and avoid making instinctive decisions but secondly, trust me when I say the second volume is leagues better Or atleast that is what I have been told. Thirdly I like your honesty about it. If you don't mind could you please check out my other avatar fanfic but this time about the second Avatar. I need actually feedback on it. I remember the first five being a bit awkward with some elements but I need some honesty on somethings.
It doesn't sound good to me either, could you help dude
"Let's make this quick," she said, gripping her iron club tighter. "I'm not in the mood for traps."
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Yes I want to make him turn ss1 but not for a while. At the moment he is already way too strong. Anyone without the use of a devil fruit doesn't stand much chance against him at this point in the story. He isn't the strongest just yet but that's because it's still only the east blue.
Bro do you realize just how overpowered ss4 could be in this world. I mean come on like saiyan saga goku is the max anyone in this world can handle and i mean even the yonko. I also never said there won't be anything beyond ss1. It's still early stages and I had to limit this shit.
As Goku squared off against Buggy, memories flooded back into his mind. He remembered that in this world, he was supposed to have the Gum-Gum Fruit, but somehow, he had never eaten it. Despite hanging out with and pestering the Shanks Crew, he had only been blessed with extraordinary physical strength. That mostly owed to his saiyan heritage and genetics. He also realized that in this universe, he never had a tail. Which meant his hopes of maybe finding a way to re grow it for SS4 and the Oozaru form were off the table. He wasn't worried at all about the powerhouses in this world. His knowledge and potential far outweighed anything in this world. The full power of even a third class saiyan warrior like Goku was most likely enough for ninety five percent of the planet. That was just in his base form. He didn't even need to bring the DBZ levels. He didn't want it to be too easy.
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Can I assume you mean Ria? Dude she was definitely something else. I promise you she ain't done just yet.
Goku's expression remained calm, his eyes piercing. "Like I said, you're just a small timer. Let me show you the power of a Saiyan when he's pissed off!"
Anime & Comics · thesaiyanprince99
Explain yourself bro
"Let's make this quick," she said, gripping her iron club tighter. "I'm not in the mood for traps."
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Good to know then it shall be done
Do you mean like the patreon message at the end of every chapter.
The Second Avatar
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