Quite busy irl with school so like… I will try to do chapters atleast once per week or if I am free then twice per week.
Changed the story and getting rid of the OC you guys despise lmao. I will focus on Kenpachi now don't worry. I aint clickbaiting. I would judge writing quality *not good*, my stability of updates will be like whenever I feel like it, story development is *meh*, character design I find *managable* and world background is *yikes*. I'm not a die hard fan of both Bleach and One Piece so note that most of it would be from imagination(especially how they attack).
The story flows really well with the use of many descriptive words to help readers picture in their mind multiple scenes within a certain part. The ‘Status’ looks phenomenal with great layering out. The character interaction is amazing as it is my first time seeing such a writer being nitty gritty towards their writing. I will give this a 4.4/5 for great effort.
Indeed, I was already planning on it.
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Anime & Comics · drragoon
Yes.
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Anime & Comics · drragoon
Thank you. I'm currently working on making new chapters as we speak. :D
Thank you for your feedback. :D
I will definitely take this feedback into consideration.
"You… why are you expressing your appreciation to the sacrifice that was put into the meals that were made possible?"
Anime & Comics · drragoon
I will take that into consideration.
The Zushi Zushi no mi was eaten by Aoki before he had encountered Smoker. He felt a sudden rise of power. Information transmitting towards his mind like a hurricane overturning cities. He was in the initial stages of perceiving gravity. It's not a Devil Fruit you could instantly use.
Anime & Comics · drragoon
I would like to state that this is another random novel I may or may not drop due to my lack of knowledge in both Animes. I will definitely have at least 20 long chapters but that would be whenever I feel like it. But if I do get a lot of viewership, it will definitely encourage me to continue this journey as I will feel confident in my writing.
A Hollow’s Adventure into One Piece
Anime & Comics · drragoon