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I'm new to webnovel and I gotta say for my third list of reading novels in this site, goodsht so far. Chapter 20 was really a shocker. I thought 'plot armor' would do its job once again but damn, it's not. Then chapter 21 came and I was just... what? As for Chapter 22? Too much information that my head can't even fathom what the hell is going but this idea such as Disruption Of Time and Noelle was transmigrated because of someone's memory and many more really has a nice feeling to it since it looks like I'm reading a kind of story that is out of the norm. Well, let's start for the review. Writing Quality - It's great. Sentence structure and the flow of reading it is pretty nice. There's no cringy stuff monolugue or dialogue (which I hated on the other novel, well, let's not tell names) that I would like you to keep doing, author. Story Development - Very, very good. The pacing is not too fast nor slow. It's very equal that might not get readers, such as me and others, to be bored. And so far, the author was slowly releasing how the story would went which made me think, as a reader, that that the author might have everything planned out. Nothing is force so far and Character Design - Nicely Done. I like how the interactions between characters are mixed with different kinds of humor. They are not awkward and force just to move the plot so that Mc can desire what he wanted. Updating Stability - No comments here. Updates 7 chaps a week. World Background - Now this, this is very mysterious and the story has a big world. I'm not just talking about the world Noelle had transmigrated to and Earth. I mean, that'a not the only world we're talking about as a flipping universe is involved here. A damn universe! This is is very hard to pulled off if the author continues to pursue this plot and it might lead to confusions later on, but here I'm expecting that the author might pull it off or else, I would be very disappointed. I'm giving it five points or stars for now since the world backgrounds is good so far. Piece? Progression? Ruiner? Kingdoms? It's like I'm reading LOTM(*cough* its bad to compare that masterpiece to this new book but anyway, don't judge me. I'm new to this site and I don't know the 'good and bad novels') Overall: No shtty or filler chapters so far and every chapters can be counted as a real chapter which is connected to the previous one and might be too in the future. (Review as of 22) Will come back once this book reaches 200.

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