MentalDemonkiller

MentalDemonkiller

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Wholesome Machiavelism should exist. In fact, it should be the most popular subgenre to exist.

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MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
1 months ago
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The good bits: 1.Unqiue and Fresh Power System under familiar setup. 2. MC's character has good depth and development. 3. Side characters have an impact on the story. 4. No romance so far. Probably not harem by the looks of it. 5. Fight scenes are very strategic and concise. Has a realistic feeling to it. Cons: 1. If you like drama or frequent show off of powers, this isn't it. MC prefers to not fight back unless he's certain of victory. 2. MC is nosy and gets wrapped up in other people's business a lot. 3. The game system (MC's golden finger) is very complex. It's not easy to grasp the rules. Even MC himself is surprised every couple of chapters.

MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
6 months ago
Replied to ItBeLikeThat

you have to understand that the mc has lived for a long time. Even a few decades is a brief period to him. And since he's planning to practically take over the whole realm, he needs to proceed with caution due to his current weakned form.

MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
6 months ago
Replied to ItBeLikeThat

I stop using a list of spells once the readers get familiar with the system.

[ Spell Library: Shadow Centipede Totem (Common); Arrow Boa Totem (Common); Bloodhound Totem (Common); Skin Elasticity (Common); Object Consciousness (Common); Cell Regeneration (Common); Muscle Relaxation (Common); Blood Pressure Manipulation (Common); Blood Temperature Shift (Common); Basic Liquification (Common).... Flamepalm (Common); Basic Healing (Ultimate) (unusable); Talent Transformation (???) (unusable) ]

Breeding To Break The World

Breeding To Break The World

Fantasy · MentalDemonkiller

MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
9 months ago
Posted

The mc and side characters are pretty cunning, but not like those annoying "smart" mcs who rely on predicting their enemy's action. His analysis skills are cool and so he makes smart decisions most of the time. Also, finally an mc who's not an orphan. The family dynamics are good. The worldbuilding also seems to have a lot of depth. I read the previous version of the book and can confidently vouch for this one's quality. But Everyone has different tastes so you might not agree with me in some points.

MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
1 years ago
Replied to Xastra

Haha, thanks. You've binged the whole thing pretty fast, I see.

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MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
1 years ago
Replied to Vegito_Blue

Check the top review. It's added at the end of the review.

MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
1 years ago
Replied to MentalDemonkiller

nvm, found it

MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
1 years ago
Posted

raws please! this is interesting so far!

MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
1 years ago
Replied to Asel213

Huh, that's interesting. I was under the impression that this was a very decent cover considering it's practically suitable to be a scene from the story itself . What in your opinion would be a more ideal cover?

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MentalDemonkiller
MentalDemonkiller
1 years ago
Replied to UnsterblichPlebb

For someone who can't even spell out a proper sentence, you're quite the harsh critic 🤨

  • Breeding To Break The World original

    Breeding To Break The World

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG HAREM OVERPOWERED SLICEOFLIFE

    *Some chapters contain heavy smut, beware. Ken, the Undefeated Mage, took on the mission to break past the world's limits for its denizens. He failed, again and again until deciding to take a leap of faith and staged a suicide. Many years have passed since then, and the [Undefeated Mage] has become a title few remember, until one day, the revival plan he had devised takes effect. From the glass coffin, he has arisen with a plan forged by time and secrets beyond the realm. With his glorious past lost to the penalty for cheating death, the new Ken has become an ordinary mortal. But his goals hasn’t changed. Only, now he know that he cannot break the world's limits by himself. His plan requires some... unusual steps. But the heroines have a say in it, as it involves Ken breeding them to the best of his capability; which means Ken's journey to the top of the world this time shall be filled with brutal lovey-dovey seggs! Additional Tags and themes: R-18, Violence, Magic, Politics, Kingdom-building, Wars, Anti-hero protagonist, Human-Nonhuman Relationship (Orcs, Elves, Goblins, Merfolk, Wyrms, Dwarves, Necros, Ghosts, Druids, Dragons, Vampires, Shapeshifters, Parasites, and many more), harem, Slavery, Interracial and interspecies relationships, pregnancy, No Ntr (Netori / Netorase /netorare), Smut (Graphic descriptions of Sex), Litrpg elements, level-up, Supernatural Abilities, Weak-to-strong, Scheming, Ruthless Protagonist, Overpowered Protagonist, Beautiful female leads, Master-Student Relationships, Overpowered Female Leads, A variety of waifus including Yanderes, Tsunderes, Milfs, Gilfs, Beastgirls, Monstergirls, lots of lemons and a whole ton of wholesomeness.

    88 Chs 1.6k Collections

  • Killing Magic original

    Killing Magic

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG DARK OVERPOWERED

    To seek strength is in human instinct. To use this strength is in human nature. To abuse this strength is in the nature of all humans, suppressed barely by ideals in the form of spiritual mentorship. Accordingly, when the road to attaining strength is opened for a meager share of a population, Billions must suffer. For the human civilization of planet Triton, this was a century of self discovery. For the common man, this was an era of envy. And for the mages blessed by the architects of human civilization, this was a stage to pursue unprecedented glory and power. It has been 97 years since human civilization has become conscious of its origin, a mystery spanning beyond their planet, waiting to be uncovered in the treacherous sea of stars. The architects have resurfaced, all twelve of them, from the dust left in history by epics and myths. Beyond the common man's vision, the architects orchestrate their own plans. Beyond the architects' plans lie their common purpose, their hopes and dreams for the human civilization. And tonight, a miracle beyond it all has been sparked; a miracle...that may not bring forth fortune, but the shadow of an erased truth; a miracle birthed by brutality and vengeful hunger. And among all mentors of human instinct, vengeance presents to you your most magnificent self, and to mankind your most abominable form.

    24 Chs 21 Collections

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