Daoist0xuJqk

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2022-05-18 Joined Global
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Daoist0xuJqk
4 months ago
Posted

I gues Good story start is good. The only problem is that the rest of the section is very short because it focuses on system features. This makes the whole section feel incomplete even though it is read.

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Daoist0xuJqk
6 months ago
Commented

Can you at least give the name of the original story?

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Daoist0xuJqk
7 months ago
Commented

Story is realy good and feels right. Thx for you writing