very very dumb decision and thinking process
No original body memories ?
change the title if you can?
Why does this sound so dumb?
Wait, what? I won against the most overpowered MC ever? Sure, he held back on his full mana power, Gift's active ability, and his weapon art, but still, I managed to outdo the protagonist.
Fantasy · WhiteDeath16
He's still the weakest
You need to correct those small mistakes you made in the prologue, there's aleast 2 or sum mistakes in the first 4 sentence
The writing quality is good? WtF bro, are you a bot? instead of correcting the author about his/her writing so that he/she can improve you're lying to the author SMH
Why do you have to make him a loser and bullied ?
Friendship is overrated
How long had it been since he could truly relax? The memories of the bloodshed and schemes in Divine World flooded his mind. Many friends were made, but they, too, abandoned him when he fell from the top.
Games · Idczhen
To what end? He was prepared to give them his wallet without violence so this statement doesn't make sense
To them, he was nothing more than an obstacle, a means to an end.
God Breaker: The Ersatz Messiah
Fantasy · Freakshow