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Every time our MC finally does something worthwhile, the author gets back to shit. Telekinesis? Apparently it doesn't exist anymore. A revolver? It was at this point that the bullets ran out. Throw the Powder bomb aside with telekinesis? Nope. Get drones or something useful out of the store? And again, no. I'll continue reading this for a couple more chapters because the story is still interesting, but every time the author does such things, there is less desire.
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I've never seen a story tied only to firearms, since authors usually start using some kind of cringe like cutting bullets with a sword and surviving after dozens of shots and other bullshit, I'm very glad to see, that someone finally write a story about shootings and how much damage even an ordinary revolver can cause. The action scenes feel very dynamic and fast, but I would like to see more of how the hero changes from one weapon to another during a shootout. The motivation of the hero is related to his bad past life and memories from a new one, in general, the plot has just begun, so something may change. Excellent work author.
GG is gremlin.
No, he have system, its enough.
How about Suicide squad? It sounds quite ironic for the TT. :D
Unexpectedly, but anyway, if the author wants to leave the damn explosion moment so badly, then so be it, the only thing I hope for is that the arc of Rapture will not stretch over 100 chapters, because first of all it was a Arcane fanfiction and that's what I came for, and I hope our MC won't come back just after the timeskip of the Arcane, it's just stupid, he wants to change the story and not just go through it. Thanks for the chapter.
Arcane: I have Plasmids F*** YEAAAAAAH!!!
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