NotYggdra

NotYggdra

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2022-05-13 Joined Global
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NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to Hamtaro_

Yeah editing and rewriting if I dont have a clue how I can write it better.

NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to Hamtaro_

Yeah I often let it correct mistakes I make. Its faster that way

NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to JustAnotherFan217

Thats good to hear, thanks for your feedback! ^.^ ~Cheers

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NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

Yes he got memories. But they are only for songs or maybe other stuff i dont know yet. I dont want him to cheat through his life. Maybe I can edit a little so that its better to understand. Btw thanks for pointing it out

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NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to Anonny_Anonymous

Sorry about that, I forgot that. I also wrote a couple of times that they scrolled through their phone because its the basics know instead of newspaper etc. I will edit that point

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NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to JustAnotherFan217

Okay thx for the ideas. Let me cook and try to rewrite the stuff

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NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to JustAnotherFan217

And of course thank you for your opinion <3

NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to JustAnotherFan217

I know what you mean BUT it cant be a 1:1 Story. Nero changed the Life of Charlie and others. There is a Hook Up in Chap 14 and there will be more later. Rose will be introduced to Alan and Jake in Chapter 18 witch will show how "annoyed" Charlie is from her. I will rewrite the first chapters after the story is etablished and I will try to better include those traits. Lets think about the Story as a "What if" Story.

NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Posted

I really like the author. A little 'what if' scenario in the Two and a Half Men series is wonderfully portrayed in the Fanfic. It really kicks off in Chapter 13, but anyone who enjoys story building should definitely read the chapters before that. ~Cheers

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NotYggdra
NotYggdra
1 months ago
Replied to UchihaGod

Yeah, Episode 1 will start soon

  • Broken Notes - A Two and a Half Men Fanfic original

    Broken Notes - A Two and a Half Men Fanfic

    TV ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY SLICEOFLIFE

    After the death of his mother, 10-year-old Nero is sent to live with Charlie Harper, an old friend of his distant father, Arthur. Charlie, a carefree bachelor known for his womanizing ways, endless supply of drinks, and laid-back Malibu lifestyle, is far from the ideal role model. Yet, amidst the chaos of Charlie's questionable choices and constant stream of party guests, Nero begins to find something he never got from his father: a sense of family. With Charlie's unfiltered humor and unconventional guidance, Nero starts to navigate the challenges of growing up and dealing with his grief. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So yeah a Two and a half men Fanfic. What more is there to say? I experimented a bit and revised a few chapters. It shouldn't be so emo anymore and should have more of the classic charm of TAAHM. ~Cheers Disclaimer: The characters, stories, and songs referenced in this work are the property of their respective creators and copyright holders. I do not own any of these elements, aside from the original characters (OC) created by me. This is a fanfiction piece for transformative and non-commercial purposes. No copyright infringement is intended.

    24 Chs 462 Collections

  • Icebound Legends original

    Icebound Legends

    Anime & Comics ROMANCE ADVENTURE COMEDY HAREM SURVIVAL ONEPIECE SUMMONS

    In a world shaped by destiny, Kaden, bears the Wyrd Compass, a mysterious relic that can summon powerful allies from across dimensions—but only when fate aligns. Bound by the ice-cold power, Kaden struggles to control his unstable abilities while leading a crew of legends. Guided by a compass that responds to the heart's desires, Kaden must face a treacherous journey, where the line between good and bad is frozen in time. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- * The represented characters and stories belong to their respective creators. I only own the OC

    18 Chs 58 Collections