Why would you give him the rinnegan??? You’re character neither has the chakra or the physique to handle the strain, let alone use the “buggy” techniques. Not to mention there’s plenty of chances to grab the rinnegan (madara, nagato potentially, literally almost any otsutsuki) But when would you ever get the chance to grab otsutsuki chakra? Either in the war arc with kaguya or boruto era.
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Naruto : Shadow King
Anime & Comics · kamidemond
Garp has conquerors haki. Otherwise he wouldn’t be using conquerors infusion with his galaxy impact. (Atleast from what I remember, I could very well be wrong)
Bad idea for these last three chapters. Should’ve touched on the more primitive or ancient pantheons first before diving into Christianity. A few people that are Christian’s are already dropping the book based on the comments I’ve read. It’s better to stay away from that sort of stuff in the future.
Reminds me of an older fanfiction. “Reborn as a Skypiean”, the mc in the book did something similar with a female celestial dragon but it was a horse instead. Anyways TFTC
"That Lunarian brat is a lunatic! He said..." Hammons William took a deep breath and continued, warning them coldly, "If we don't meet his demands, he'll give those Celestial Dragons aphrodisiacs and throw them into a pigsty—then broadcast it to the entire world using a large transponder snail."
The Strongest Lunarian in One Piece
Anime & Comics · Bleam
Loving the story so far, keep it up.
Honestly, it’s an OKAY translation. There are occasions (last 9 or so chapters) that have the occasional Chinese name. Which is annoying. Other than that, the translator should probably triple check and actually edit the translations if they know English well. Just so it flows better. Other than those bits and translation errors it’s not a bad read.
Three horsemen of the apocalypse? I mean that war simulator was called ‘apocalypse’ and there is 3 of the humans that survived
"This, my victors! Is your coronation, as my Horsemen!"
Hades in Marvel
Movies · User_Not_Found
Not sure if it’s the same one but there is a translation in one piece with the same concept. I think it was Indian though. It’s called ‘One Piece: Kingdom Building System’.
I’m not even sure what I just read, but whoever created this should be put in jail. You might be thinking like I was going into this, “Oh a fanfiction where the mc is reborn as kaido’s son, that might be good!” Spoiler, it wasn’t. The first paragraph of the first chapter is LITERALLY A KISSING SCENE BETWEEN YAMATO AND THE MC AT LIKE 5. What in the actual fuck. The author should definitely be on a watchlist at the bare minimum. Read at your own risk!
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original KNY: Floret Grace (Hiatus, due to lack of interest)
An Ancient Demoness has risen from her imprisonment... what will she do?3 Chs 7 Collections
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One Piece: The Lunarian Girl (hiatus, for now)
The lone Lunarian survivor of Orel'bora, the ancient city of Lunarians in the west blue, situated in the skies, and the last stronghold for the Lunarian race was destroyed by what could only be described as a 'divine beam of light' destroying the city and leaving only three survivors but not for long.. (Book cover is NOT mine, credits to the original artist which i couldn't find.)4 Chs 63 Collections
Why is the last few paragraphs just repeated the same way just different words…. The word count go crazy
Ryuuji's expression darkened in response. His pride had been pricked, and now his frustration began to show. He clenched his fists, his sharp features tightening as he gritted his teeth. The crowd watched with bated breath, sensing that this match was no longer as straightforward as it had initially seemed.
Naruto: The Medical God
Anime & Comics · EBS