Thanks for this constructive criticism. It makes me feel a lot better that someone actually read this, whether it was only a few chapters read or not. I’ll be remaking this novel, so again, thank you for reading this Webnovel.
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graggle_lago
2 years ago
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messed up a little here but it doesn't matter haha (my life gets worse every day)
Volume 1-
A painful death, all due to a misunderstanding. Julian sat there, hopeless. His death was imminent. Slowly, it all went black.
"I'm... alive?"
To Julian's surprise, he was not exactly dead.
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Volume 2-
The classroom was filled with incoherent chatter and babble, a combination of all the conversations mixed together, coming into a single ear.
"Settle down, class! A former student is returning!"
The normally loud classroom began to lower there voices, all shocked by the sudden and random information. No one was informed about this besides the teachers. The whispers and faint conversations continued.
Creak...
The door pushed open. A familiar face stepped into the classroom.
ye dats my bad imma remove that part
Talentless Transmigration
Fantasy · graggle_lago