Daniel_2273

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Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
28 days ago
Commented

Author, stop it, seriously, your villains' motivations are really bad. The romance is also always very instantaneous and unrealistic. Maybe you're just a teenager and have no idea about these things, so I apologize.

As his sister's words drifted away, his face twisted into a cruel smile. He wasn't about to give up on Aria, not by a long shot. If he couldn't win her heart with love, he had other means in mind, far more sinister.

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

Fantasy · Elias_Nightwalker

Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
28 days ago
Commented

He once absorbed the dungeon stone's skill, why doesn't he absorb the weapon and bracelet's skills?

1. Divine Retribution: Calls forth heavenly light to strike down enemies who have committed grievous sins. The power scales based on the target's level of corruption, causing greater damage to darker or evil foes (All Race).

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

Fantasy · Elias_Nightwalker

Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
29 days ago
Commented

Autor, are you ok?

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Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
29 days ago
Commented

If every villain is as dumb as these, this story is doomed.

"No, this can't happen much longer. He's just showing off his wealth and stealing all my limelight. I can't let that happen. I will prove to them that I am better than him," Marcus thought, his resolve growing stronger. He assumed Ethan had no other formidable abilities, only wealth.

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

Reincarnated With Three Unique Skills

Fantasy · Elias_Nightwalker

Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
1 months ago
Commented

Thank God the story is back to normal.

Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
1 months ago
Commented

This story has a lot of cool stuff, but it also has a lot of nonsense, seriously. In any case, I must praise the author, because it is better done without perfection than never done at all.

Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
2 months ago
Commented

That's it, it was worth it while it lasted. I dropped it.

Activation phrases were used in magic and skill activation, but not usually with marks. That was why a warrior might say "Blade Arts" before saying the skill, or a mage might say "Flamma" before using a fire spell. A mark usually has no requirements, so a mark of fireball, the user would literally just say "fireball" or sometimes, not even say anything at all.

Marked Ones: Advent of the Demon Prince

Marked Ones: Advent of the Demon Prince

Fantasy · VeeRoze

Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
2 months ago
Commented

Nooo, I hope this doesn't happen again. It doesn't make sense for the person to shout out the move they're going to make.

"[Forsaken Arts: Gouging Strike]!" he shouted while spinning around and swinging towards he beast that had finally reached him.

Marked Ones: Advent of the Demon Prince

Marked Ones: Advent of the Demon Prince

Fantasy · VeeRoze

Daniel_2273
Daniel_2273
2 months ago
Commented

Please, I hope spells don't need to be sung. I've never seen anything more ridiculous than the need to sing for magic to work. Damn you Harry Potter.

"Don't worry, I've got you! [Lux: Heal]!" A bright golden light erupted from the hands of one of the men in green. The light slowly enveloped a soldier's stump of an arm and stopped the bleeding as it sealed the wound. He would live, but he would never be the same.

Marked Ones: Advent of the Demon Prince

Marked Ones: Advent of the Demon Prince

Fantasy · VeeRoze