Zay_Hayden

12 hours ago

Commented

Lame, I liked this story but u just keep nerfing ur character every chance u get.

I also decided to remove [body takeover] which will come much later.

Becoming a Dungeon Core

Video Games · whatisthisname

Zay_Hayden

13 hours ago

Commented

Any way works change it up sometimes?

[[How do even write the noise?]]

Becoming a Dungeon Core

Video Games · whatisthisname

Zay_Hayden

14 hours ago

Commented

At this point I can’t reason to read any more of this filler. It’s just too much. Most of the story doesn’t include lux. He’s our mc? Is he not?

ch 61 The Touch Part 21

Transformers Prime: I am Allspark

Anime & Comics · PRIME_PRIMUS

Zay_Hayden

6 days ago

Commented

I agree where’s the man. I also think u could do interludes, and side stories with side characters. Like for ex take battle of railoath. The authors made a side story to flush out some side characters. But either way I love the story

ch 30 Noble 6

Star Wars: The War That Only the UNSC Can End

Video Games · elnikinxd

Zay_Hayden

9 days ago

Commented

lol odst didn’t think it could mean storm trooper too lol

ch 26 Battle of Tatooine, Part 2

Star Wars: The War That Only the UNSC Can End

Video Games · elnikinxd

Zay_Hayden

20 days ago

Commented

Thanks author

ch 13 Information

Star Wars: The War That Only the UNSC Can End

Video Games · elnikinxd

Zay_Hayden

20 days ago

Commented

Another banger

ch 12 Temporary alliance

Star Wars: The War That Only the UNSC Can End

Video Games · elnikinxd

Zay_Hayden

22 days ago

Commented

Almost did a reach man I was gonna cry

ch 0 9 Battle of Naboo, Part 4

Star Wars: The War That Only the UNSC Can End

Video Games · elnikinxd

Zay_Hayden

22 days ago

Commented

Another banger

ch 0 2 Terminus-2

Star Wars: The War That Only the UNSC Can End

Video Games · elnikinxd

Zay_Hayden

22 days ago

Commented

Great thank author

ch 0 3 The goddess and her apostle

Star Wars: The War That Only the UNSC Can End

Video Games · elnikinxd