I have a feeling this author , this book and I will get along very well ^^
ch 0 -3 Important: Read Before the Novel
Fantasy 路 Hardy1j
Thank you. I'm not a native english speaker so I might have misunderstood the sentence.
He couldn't help but squeak out a complaint as he rubbed his feet. His legs were tiny so what right did they have to be this sore? Hell, he hadn't been this sore even after they were forced to march for nigh on two days straight just to cross the desert.
Fantasy 路 NuiProductions
馃槀
Did I kill too many characters off or was it that the ending wasn't good enough?
Fantasy 路 zowji
You'll stop wanting that when your fav character will be the one to die
Did I kill too many characters off or was it that the ending wasn't good enough?
Fantasy 路 zowji
Will the real Jullien Evenus please stand up ?
"You're right."聽
Fantasy 路 Entrail_JI
But I guess the real reason why people consider this ability weak is that in order to induce powerful emotions in someone , one has to feel the said emotions with the same intensity. So as the examiners said, it can really drive the user insane and unstable. I can understand why one might find it weak.
"....Emotive."聽
Fantasy 路 Entrail_JI
I honestly hope he'll be able to act like his true self sooner.
How would Julien conduct himself if he were to give a speech?聽
Fantasy 路 Entrail_JI
what do you put into that anything ?~
ch 0 7 Black Star [1]
Fantasy 路 Entrail_JI
Then she really didn't think thoroughly before doing it . because people are watching her, so the news can easily spread and reach Atticus. Besides, if he is a nerd, as she herself said, I don't see what popularity she could have from going out with him. In comparison, I believe being Jackson's girlfriend would be more profitable, popularity-wise.
Kira chuckled and replied, "You mean that nerd? I'm just using him to gain a little popularity. I didn't even allow him to kiss me. He's probably waiting for me now, thinking I'd come and give him a kiss. I'll just tell him I had to do an assignment or something." Jackson then pulled her close for another kiss.
Fantasy 路 RealmWeaver
Although the interactions between characters were well written , it couldn麓t cover up the chapter麓s main flaw which is that it is just an info dump ( i had stop midway i the chapter for this reason)Nothing managed to get me interested enough to continue i'm not a fan of less than fifteen years old Mcs so i'll leave this novel at that.May God help you with your works author.
ch 0 1 Altair
Fantasy 路 Lord_Damocles
The chapter started so good but ended up disappointing for me.Good points : -It鈥檚 written in a simple way so it's easy to get in the book and to understand what happens.-The Mc seems somewhat relatable and relaxed( i don't like cold Mcs)The bad points :- The author likes descriptions.馃槱It's not a bad thing per se ( it helps one get immersed easily when it's well done).But the problem here is that the author gets carried away in his descriptions.If you analyse the chapter in depth , you'll realise that it's this lenghty because of unnecesary descriptions and info dumping. - The info dumping is really glaring.The author could have spread the informations througout the chapters but instead he did it here . If only the world presented in this way was interesting enough or so original that it was too hard not to explain it like that ! But unfortunetly , it's just your common solo-leveling- like world.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Fantasy 路 KaeNovels
I wonder what he fantasizes about since his world is already a fantasy of its own.
It's more like I need to drink more water in general. I get so sucked into my fantasy worlds sometimes, I forget the real world is moving on around me. I start muttering to myself.
Fantasy 路 KaeNovels
With just this ?
Adonis maintained his bow, earning a soft smile from Seraph. She found herself getting quite fond of this human.
Fantasy 路 Magecrafter
But the problem is that she then would fall back into being a waste of a cultivator.
"As seen, Ye Qingtang does have some abilities. She is obviously first for the sword array segment today," said the Herbal Faction Elder thoughtfully with a hint of admiration towards Ye Qingtang in his tone.
Fantasy 路 North Night
Author hiw about using "[ ]" or "< >" in order to render the letter even more distinguishable from the rest of the text ?
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Fantasy 路 NTNova
And now my question is : why wouldn鈥檛 his father use it on himself ? After all , this could have made him even more powerful. Maybe then he wouldn鈥檛 have had to "disappear".
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Fantasy 路 NTNova
"Though they* ...for him"I think you should rewrite this sentence author. How about this : " Asher walked amidst the crowd of of people. They pitied him. Yet, never reached out to help him ."
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Fantasy 路 NTNova
Although it's not okay to insulte people( no matter the reason) , we don't know why he did it in the first place, nor why everyone refrains from helping him.
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Fantasy 路 NTNova
Thanks for the correction 馃榿
When he awoke, he had nothing. Not even his health. With his stomach covered in dirty bandages, he lay upon the hard, dusty earth of a foreign place.
A Time of Tigers - From Peasant to Emperor
Fantasy 路 Nick_Alderson