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The chapter has a lot of potential, has a lot of issues but it’s fine all you need is an editor. Proof reading your work is a great way to fix a lot of problems with your story. Don’t worry with time you’ll get better at writing. Sadly I do not follow this advice myself.
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original Remis Volume 1:The Wanderer
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The Wanderer is a being from the Heavens that holds advanced magic and the ability to resist most attacks, magical or physical. At first it was just curiosity to study it, but what did you think would happen when such an advanced being could potentially fall into the hands of the powerful?16 Chs 0 Collections
No thank you I plan on finishing this story first then I might consider it.
Remis Volume 1:The Wanderer
Fantasy · Director_Kun