coredisciple

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coredisciple
coredisciple
2 months ago
Posted

Author is it gonna be harem? The red lotus sect leader seems cute enough. Really hope it’s not gonna be a harem. Also this story is too dynamic, literally the MC never stays in a single place and smth always goes wrong. The plot gets a little annoying after a while.

coredisciple
coredisciple
4 months ago
Posted

This story is amazing. Funny, interesting, light-hearted and witty. You won’t be a single trashy trope (in fact this story is so spontaneous and random, it’s too funny). 5/5 story

coredisciple
coredisciple
5 months ago
Commented

Author is it harem?

coredisciple
coredisciple
7 months ago
Posted

The book is amazing. Hands down of the best concepts there is. It’s written well and flows very smoothly. It’s also really interesting, fun, and engaging to the reader. My only concern is the MC. He comes the poorest and trashiest of places but he remains a naive kid. I understand it’s for the sake of character development but it’s been 250+ chapters and he has this idealistic vision that I find extremely annoying. Also he’s very inconsistent with how he views the world. The other characters are written amazingly and are super awesome. I wish the MC was Wyntor and not this child that goes through a mental crisis after every incident. Overall, still one of the best I’ve read.

coredisciple
coredisciple
coredisciple
10 months ago
Posted

Author, how many ppl in the harem? I don’t wanna start if he starts going Pokémon collecting.

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coredisciple
coredisciple
10 months ago
Commented

Sorry dropping rn. It had great potential but now it’s just flowing randomly. Power scaling is so autistic, idk who’s strong and who’s not. The MC is just meh and plain. Half of his actions are dumb and a waste of time. The writing is done very well though, so I’m kinda sad to be dropping this. Overall, this was not bad.

coredisciple
coredisciple
10 months ago
Commented

Author doesn’t even seem like he is trying to hide the idiocy of the MC anymore.

coredisciple
coredisciple
1 years ago
Replied to coredisciple

I’m ranting a lot but this novel is really great. I’m just worried for what the future MC holds for us.

coredisciple
coredisciple
1 years ago
Replied to sasha28210

Very apt description.

  • HP: Immortal Magician original

    HP: Immortal Magician

    Book&Literature ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE HARRYPOTTER

    The world of novels is just that. Fiction and imaginary - an escape from the harshness of the real world. But not this time. A world where you know the future, a world where you can gain power, a world where you are surrounded by wonder, and a world so primitive yet advanced. This is where Jason Sharp finds himself after a simple nap. With so many new opportunities, watch Jason as he grows, explores, and reaches the peak. ---------------------- All characters do not belong to me and are derived from other wonderful works of fiction. There will be many elements that are shared with the canon, but it will also contain many new variables. Enjoy!

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