Are the full stops at the end of the dialogue intentional?
"No, I need them here to complete the JSIT scan of a tree. These trees are bigger than the one found at the valley. So we need to know why while we're here. We might find a clue about the energy lines.", She replied.
Sci-fi · HalfPint
Another great chapter. Thanks.
*They got ambushed* *They said that it was an anomaly or something.*
"His ship was sent on a secret mission to the Empire of Ytias, They go ambushed. They're saying that it was an anomaly or something. But the whole crew of the GHT Moonshiner died."
Sci-fi · HalfPint
*periodic table*
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Sci-fi · HalfPint
Underrated, informational and most importantly, no unnecessary smut scenes. The novel reinvigorate my love for sci-fi especially when it involves space exploration. Hope this author will gain more recognition in the future.
*Milky Way*
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Sci-fi · HalfPint
*Phenomena* is the plural for phenomenon
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Sci-fi · HalfPint
*gases*
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Sci-fi · HalfPint
Might need to rework this sentence especially at NEX2320.
The Captain quickly gave the post FTL instructions to the crew on the bridge as he started looking at the reports of the current star system. It was known only by it's codename, NEX2320 was a binary star system. A complex array of 34 Planets and their respective moons orbited the pair of White dwarfs, Each not much bigger than the Star of humanities home system.
Sci-fi · HalfPint
Nice introduction [img=recommend]!
Truth and Family: A God's Journey
Fantasy · Sunny_Shad0w