Sorry Mate, I like your idea but because you constantly state something is a reminder of something else, your writing is very repetitive and very difficult to enjoy, so I’m going to drop the novel. You should really stop saying that things are a reminder of something, especially if the protagonist has already been reminded of that thing in the sentence before.
Hey mate, just some advice; stop writing “*random thing* is a reminder of *random thing*” it’s very repetitive, and your writing it in every third sentence
The issue with the book is that over half of the writing is just him upgrading skills, there are multiple groups of 5+ chapters of him just upgrading skills, it gets worse the more the story progresses.
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High Martial Arts: Invincible Starts from Basic Archery
Urban · Blue-faced Asura
Hey mate, I’ve liked the novel so far but I have to say this chapter, as your first premium chapter, is horrible!! All that was said was the Ajax moved through the crowd, telling himself far to many times, that he couldn’t let his aunt be humiliated. And random people in the crowd giving Dave a nick name. It could have been said in like 5 lines, instead you charged readers, at just the 21st chapter. Really poor, and if it happens again I’ll probably have to drop the novel because it’s not worth the money or time. Really hope your future chapters are better than this because I’ve liked the novel so far!
This novel is fucked. As far as I can tell, the premise is that the girlfriend is trauma bonded with a sociopathic ex boyfriend, who emotionally manipulates her, along with helping others rape her. The boyfriend is a cuck who gets off on being cucked, even when his mate is raping her. He’s still in love with her even though she’s cheating, lying and pretending. Reading this made me feel sick.
Is trying to fight monsters with significantly more power than you, good character development though? Seems like a pretty stupid thing to do..?
[...This is not good Character Development… :/]
Infinite Evolution: My Idle Evolution System
Eastern · Astral_Pandemonium
Unfortunately I’m dropping the novel because of the random full stops at the end of every chapter that are I infuriating to listen to on audio, and the fact that it’s 10 coins for the shortest chapter of any novel I’ve read on WebNovel, and start at chapter 20. Really bad set up, very clearly trying to maximise money earned even at the expense of the enjoyment of the story.
Please get rid of the full stops at the end of every chapter they are infuriating to listen to when you listen to the audio. Please!!
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Inside my favorite novel
Fantasy · CAESAR20
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original The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak
The Youngest S-Ranker - Journey to the peak What happens when a young orphan boy is abandoned by the only person he has ever cared about? What happens when a young boy who's never had anything, who has lived his life at the absolute bottom of society, discovers he has unmatched talent? In a world where strength rules, what will the young boy who is now alone, unsure of his future, do when he discovers he has the potential to rise above everyone else, has the potential to claim whatever, and whoever he wants? In the world of Garla, magic, and martial arts are commonplace. All children awaken their talents on their 10th birthday. When Val awakens he is surprised to discover he has far more talent than he could ever believe. This is the beginning of his adventure, which will be difficult, yet rewarding. That will be like nothing he could ever have expected or thought possible. Follow Val as he discovers how far he can go, how much he can accomplish, and what the future holds for him. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This is my first novel, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated. This novel will hopefully continue for a long time. The protagonist will have relationships with women but won't necessarily commit to any woman. There will be *lemon* scenes, but as the protagonist will be a solo adventurer he won't be going around with a group of women. I have the romance and harem tags because there will be relationship development with female characters. I do not own the cover, if you do you can email me and I will remove it.40 Chs 149 Collections
Another entire chapter where literally nothing happens
God-Tier Fishing System
Eastern · Taleseeker