Cruz_Scifers1988

Cruz_Scifers1988

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Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
1 months ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter. I can't wait for more

Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
4 months ago
Commented

all chapters after this one will not load up what's going on

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Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
8 months ago
Commented

I think you are rushing it a little too much, but otherwise, I like it, so keep up the good work

Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
8 months ago
Commented

you really need to stick one name for technique and cultivation lvls cause you are changing them every chapter it seems

Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
11 months ago
Commented

hey you finally update the story again can't wait for more

Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
1 years ago
Posted

you need to fix chapter 29 before I will read any more cause 28 and 29 are the same chapter so it's hard to picture

Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
1 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter

Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
1 years ago
Commented

just a thought but you could have made a new story if you wanted to do another insert I'll still try to read this hope it doesn't kill the story for me

Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
1 years ago
Commented

thanks for the chapter

This book has been deleted.
Cruz_Scifers1988
Cruz_Scifers1988
1 years ago
Posted

I really enjoy reading this I have noticed some of the words are stuck together as in you forgot the space only flaw I have seen so far otherwise great fanfic and I'll keep reading if you keep writing