Jeffery_XXVI

Jeffery_XXVI

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Bloodshot eyes and Greener pastures

2022-03-07 Joined Global
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Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
2 months ago
Posted

Hi guys, author here dropping a review of my work. While this is my most recent book and one I've thought about making for a long time, i can admit it does start slow. I believe in fleshing out the characters and introducing newer elements into the story in bits to not overwhelm the story or the readers. However, when it comes to its world and characters I can definitely say you're in for a ride, one you won't regret in the slightest. Happy reading, kind traveler. [img=recommend] (Comments and reviews are always appreciated and I will respond to every single one)

Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
3 months ago
Replied to Third_moon

That last bit is more so a writing style.(Damp, putrid) I believe its also adressed too, the air is putrid with the smell of corpses, hence why he puts his mask over his nose.

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Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
3 months ago
Replied to The_Celestial_King

It's probably his first book, this is his trial and error phase. I believe most newbie authors start out like this, he has the spirit all he needs is to messup and messup until he eventually gets it right

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Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
5 months ago
Commented

Type shii

Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
5 months ago
Commented

That was uncalled for bruh😭

"Whore's bastard! Watch where you're going!"

Shadow Slave

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
5 months ago
Commented

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Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
6 months ago
Replied to jwhbsrinvfriygrf

I'm sorry it came to this, thank you for sticking by me through Visceral Online. And I hope you will continue to support me through out my other projects. (of which I'm making a soccer book and crime filled fantasy)

Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
6 months ago
Replied to jwhbsrinvfriygrf

I am sorry. But I can't lie to you or myself, If i force it. You're gonna see something I'm not passionate or proud about and its going to ruin the book even further.

Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
9 months ago
Replied to jwhbsrinvfriygrf

No problems

Jeffery_XXVI
Jeffery_XXVI
9 months ago
Replied to Raf_Gamer

Yeah, took a bit of inspo from the raphtalia slave scene

  • Hunt/Devour original

    Hunt/Devour

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE DARK SUPERPOWERS TRAGEDY ANTIHERO

    In just three days, The world had fallen... Like meteors wiping out the dinosaurs, an Angel descended from a tear in the sky, unleashing a flood of destruction that ravaged humanity. Vielat, the imperial city, was the first to fall. Its people slaughtered by the dozen, its livestock reduced to mincemeat, and its grand architecture turned to dust. In the aftermath of the Angel's devastation, humanity began to rebuild, taking refuge in underground shelters and abandoned towns. Though the world slowly rose from the ashes, one man refused to move on. The Angels, now known as the Monarchs, were responsible for the death of his family and the destruction of everything he once held dear. The rest of the world may have accepted defeat, but he had not. Swearing vengeance, he vowed to end the Monarchs' reign, even if it cost him his life. * * * PS- I am not the owner of the cover art used, if you are the original owner and want it taken down. It will be removed.

    14 Chs 3 Collections

  • MMORPG: Visceral Online original

    MMORPG: Visceral Online

    Games ACTION ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM MAGIC MYSTERY DARK OVERPOWERED ANTIHERO VIDEOGAME

    What does revenge mean? Harvey crushed the man's finger with his boot, relishing in the satisfaction of his agonizing scream. What does revenge mean? Walking towards the man writhing in pain, Harvey delivered a forceful kick to his ribs as desperate pleas for help escaped him. This is revenge. ... Harvey Laurier and numerous players, once immersed in the virtual world of Visceral Online, found themselves inexplicably trapped with no means of escape. How was such a phenomenon possible? In a fantasy realm filled with dragons, monsters, cursed weapons, and kingdoms—a dream for many gamers—an emerging faction within the game transformed this dream into a chilling nightmare. Players capable of challenging their dominance are targeted before they can reach their full potential, with Harvey finding himself in their crosshairs. However, in the midst of his battle against the faction, his girlfriend becomes a casualty, losing her life in the process. For many, such an event would be traumatizing, but for Harvey, it shattered something. A loosely held chord within him snapped, and he made a solemn vow upon her corpse. "I'll kill every single one of them with my own hands, regardless of what I have to sacrifice to do so.” Additional tags No edge lord(synopsis is exaggerated) World building Vengeance Fantasy Trapped Mystery.

    42 Chs 137 Collections

  • Are you real?: The XXVI set original

    Are you real?: The XXVI set

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE R18 MYSTERY DARK VILLAIN NONHUMAN APOCALYPSE SCARY SUPERNATURAL

    What are they hiding? What is the whole point of this? Is there a point? "The skies fake, the water’s fake, my blood's fake. Am I fake?" The world as they knew it was under the control of a higher group of individuals who had a plan... a vision for the world. A vision they didn't feel the need to share with the public. 26-year-old John Billoway was a part of this vision, tied ever so tightly to it in a way he couldn't comprehend and each time he gets so close to breaking out of the fabricated world- he hears a thud and then a reset.

    16 Chs 6 Collections

  • 40 Yards original

    40 Yards

    Sports ACTION ADVENTURE COMEDY SLICEOFLIFE CAMPUS FASTPACED

    Wanting to become a striker, Byron Whitaker was hit with a dose of reality that told him that he wasn't adequate enough to be one. Due to this he is put as a central midfielder and that's where his talents truly shine, his passing, his stamina, his vision. All these things make him realize he was looking at the pitch with a closed mind. However, in this new position he can still achieve his dream, his dream of becoming a pro player. However, even though he accepted a position change, he would never give up his love for goals.

    37 Chs 140 Collections

  • Wanderer's of the Cosmos original

    Wanderer's of the Cosmos

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE WEAKTOSTRONG

    Jeffery here, couple of changes to the synopsis, this updated version should have no issues and from today I'll continue pumping out chapters, Huurahh. Cosmos Startun, Ruler of the universe had 13 children who were given the constellations as titles. Leo, Aries, Taurus, Libra, Virgo, Aquarius, Pisces, Gemini, Scorpio, Cancer, Sagittarius, Capricornus, and the last Ophiuchus. After four millennia of living as the ruler of the cosmos, Startun's lifetime had finally come to an end and he was tasked to give away his title to one of his children. In front of him all of them stood, not daring to make a sound, Cosmos stood up slowly and walked towards them passing the first five of the bunch and moving towards the lower half. He stopped at Virgo his beloved daughter, Her face lit up but quickly shut down as he passed her and tapped Ophiuchus on his temple. "Find the tome of Benjamin and claim your title as the ruler of the cosmos." A few hours later Startun died and as Ophiuchus looked at his siblings, he could feel their hate boiling and everything became blank right after he heard a thud. Cast to the underworld after the Sun king had been overthrown, Dawn wandered the underworld in search of the miracle tome that is said to grant the wishes of whoever finds it, and in order to restore the name of her father and to save her brother who suffered incurable wounds. She must find the Tome. Both of their stories collide and Dawn realises she must rely on Ophiuchus if she wants to restore her family name and save her brother while, Ophiuchus has to learn to trust someone other than himself if he wants to live, and together they go on an adventure with bounties placed on their heads by none other than the strongest beings in the universe, The Zodiac.

    4 Chs 2 Collections

  • Daemon: Charade of a thousand souls original

    Daemon: Charade of a thousand souls

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS VILLAIN NONHUMAN SUPERNATURAL

    4.8

    For as long as anyone could remember, daemons have existed. They terrorized, colonized and destroyed anything in their path. Thats when they appeared, the first humans to be able to control their mana to unleash magic spells drove the daemons to the edges of the earth and with every daemon the humans killed they seemed to get stronger. Daemons were evolving at a rapid rate and when one human was killed, the first daemon to be able to control mana was born. Magic is based into four categories. Healing magic, Battle magic, Enchantment magic and support/creation magic. No man has been able to use all of the categories. Magic levels are put into acts. The greater the amount of mana applied to a spell, the greater the act. Follow Igor Dragonstead, born into the silver lining of both worlds. He slowly grows to realize the things he must protect and ones he must end. MC is a half-human half-daemon hybrid with a character type that goes from weak to strong, but with a lot of development. Side characters will be well developed and will all have chances to showcase what they have to offer. The best part of any fantasy novel (imo) is the antagonists and my book is not shy of them. I did as much as I could to make the antagonists of this novel have so much sauce that you could feel it in real time. The book should be about 200-500 chapters, no less no more. Feel free to comment on typos, errors or even your favorite chapter or character. Author notes: I’ll try to be fast and pacey when releasing new content, there will be a lot of fun moments, auxiliary chapters and hopefully you can stay for the entire ride.

    29 Chs 60 Collections

  • Which will you choose? original

    Which will you choose?

    Horror ACTION R18 MYSTERY DARK SUPERPOWERS VILLAIN TRAGEDY GENIUS SCARY

    A cast out deity comes down to earth and plagues a village, his offer was a simple one. He would ask you to choose between two events, situations or moments and if you pick one. You get a wish, anything you can dream of. However, if you don't choose. It'll be treated as a breach of contract, your soul would be repossessed and your body and mind would be sentenced to some sort of suffering that would suit the way you lived.

    13 Chs 7 Collections