Arthur_Hirai

7 days ago

Commented

First person, more comfortable to read because we got to see the story from MC perspective. If it's third person, it's more like someone telling us the story of MC that are already done

Should I continue using first person view in our protagonist? Like 'I' 'Me' 'Myself'

Multiversal: The Shop

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

Arthur_Hirai

10 days ago

Commented

"He said it in passing, such as I do not know the importance. It was merely a week ago and said if you came about that I should tell you to 'Check over at home because your Cousin woke up'." He repeated, probably verbatim, the way he spoke it rather than his normal tone.

A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Anime & Comics · AStoryForOne

Arthur_Hirai

10 days ago

Commented

Best girl

"Elysia… She could take on Herscherrs alone."

Achievement Hunter

Anime & Comics · IdleYoungMaster

Arthur_Hirai

22 days ago

Replied to Arthur_Hirai

and I think i don't often see them in a group chat fics

I've already chosen the first male candidate but still having some trouble with the rest, so suggest some before I start getting ideas. Also please don't suggest generic, or overused characters.

Webtoon Character: Tenjou Yoriichi

Anime & Comics · Leip0t

Arthur_Hirai

22 days ago

Commented

Elysia (honkai impact), it can relate to the alien thing in isekai cheat Musashi (FGO), a servant Lala (To Love-ru), alien technology genius

I've already chosen the first male candidate but still having some trouble with the rest, so suggest some before I start getting ideas. Also please don't suggest generic, or overused characters.

Webtoon Character: Tenjou Yoriichi

Anime & Comics · Leip0t

Arthur_Hirai

25 days ago

Replied to Shion_Hatsune10

Lala best girl

"Huh? What do you mean, Saruyama? And don't shout so loudly to my ears!" Misogi asked his friend named Saruyama Kenichi with a confused tone, "And isn't my face always like this?"