Peakest of peak fictions I can only dream to achieve that level of storytelling capabilities
Either way, I had to regret that decision after waking up right next to her in the local hospital. Apparently, falling girls don't weigh less than the walking ones. Only if a crab god would have stolen her weight before my rib cage was ruptured….
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Fantasy · Kiltarina_Sovaltos
Yo sir. Nice to meet you
Oh yeah sure
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Fantasy · Kiltarina_Sovaltos
Thanks. Will try to keep that in mind for future chapters
Ha woh zyada detailing kiya because I wanted to make it a really garbo first chapter with somewhat good writing
Now, where were we? Yes, the basin. I rotated the handle of the steel tap anti-clockwise and the small liquid droplets coming together and forming a tiny version of waterfalls in which I dripped my warm palms in enduring the cold harsh truth the water is hitting me with and gather some of it in the joint palm masquerading as a bowl. Knowing this will ruin the pleasure yet accepting it as a grown-up adult was my responsibility. Yet performing the heinous act was unbearable.
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Fantasy · Kiltarina_Sovaltos
It was by design tho. The whole point was to make this para as detailed as possible
Eventually, I gave up and tried to wake up. First I put my left elbow on the bed to support the rest of my body and rolled leftward so the centrifugal force would make me be able to sit up. And that's what happened. I couldn't sit up just with my elbow so I had to do the same thing with my palm. After sitting up I blinked rapidly so the laziness would haze off. If you're wondering it worked or not, no it didn't. It's a useless tactic. I had to put my legs outside of the bed, on the floor and stand up to actually feel any kind of freshness. As soon as I could walk, I went to the basin to wash off the sleep from my weak face. Oh, wait did I gloss over the details about how I turned off the alarm before coming to the basin? Sorry.
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Fantasy · Kiltarina_Sovaltos
which one ? "I'm supposed to wake up at 7" ?
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Fantasy · Kiltarina_Sovaltos
Thanks I'll keep that in mind
But suddenly something unexpected happened. In the eternal void of darkness that had nothing but endless emptiness, I could feel the touch of a heavenly bed where I could lose myself into. The tempting offer was impossible to resist. And after years of pain, I realised that it was my greatest mistake.
Totally Mid Slash Sheet Storytelling
Fantasy · Kiltarina_Sovaltos
I think it does work in the context tho .I mean he's overexaggerating everything. Not that this was intentional or anything. But still holds up. What do you think ?
But suddenly something unexpected happened. In the eternal void of darkness that had nothing but endless emptiness, I could feel the touch of a heavenly bed where I could lose myself into. The tempting offer was impossible to resist. And after years of pain, I realised that it was my greatest mistake.
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Fantasy · Kiltarina_Sovaltos
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original Totally Mid Slash Sheet Storytelling
Witness the wonderfully shitty tale of teen drama turning into wicked fantasy thriller when The Boy meets The Girl and finds out unusual things about her. Enjoy reading the story with mid or shit writing mistakes, or don't. Your problem not mine.14 Chs 7 Collections
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Umineko fanfic game to play with friends. Try solving the crime of Rokkenjima.1 Chs 0 Collections
Ahh the guys with gf to brag about. Gotta be my least favorite gender. Jk lol. Glad you're happy with your love life.
"What do you mean 'not that much' ?", The thing that made me feel this was what she genuinely felt was because of the tears in her eyes. I was like wtf? That was serious?
Totally Mid Slash Sheet Storytelling
Fantasy · Kiltarina_Sovaltos