As a few comments started, the first chapter is indeed heart breaking and full of action. The story pulls you right in. Well-written, action-packed, it is a must read.
Yes, how is it possible?
"But witnesses tell us that there was a roar of guns in that area. How is it possible that there was not a single bullet?" Journee was confused.
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Looking forward to the picnic
Oh, he is impressed
"So, there was this girl who was in the next room to Zion's. I couldn't see her face, her hair was all over it. I don't how but she too knew about the cameras and also that I removed every single one of them. They were safe in my pocket but the sleight of her hand was so amazing that she swiped every single one of the cameras from my pocket and I had no idea," narrated Archer.
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Cynical
"He does, Theo not so much. He rarely trusts anyone," responded Archer.
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True
"I am the bodyguard of Zion, the Don, well the new Don. I have responsibilities. Every eye is on me, I can't just walk in the federal plaza whenever I want to," explained Archer.
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Oh, will he find her?
I would love to learn how to pick a lock
Tony shook his head in disbelief and handed a leather pouch to Archer. Archer unfolded the pouch and took out a tension wrench and an offset diamond pick. Within seconds he picked all the pins of the lock and turned the tension wrench. The lock clicked open. He softly pushed the door open.
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yes, she did give him her address
Then suddenly a bulb lit over his head. She told him her address. She whispered it in his ears. Now it was necessary for him to go meet with the Assistant Director, Chris. Someone else was keeping an eye on Zion and he wanted to know everything about them.
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I would go for KFC any day
The diner on the corner was packed with people. The delicious smell of fried chicken mixed with the sweet smell of pie was tingling Archer's nose. His stomach rumbled loudly. He was extremely hungry. The job of being Zion's bodyguard was a hectic one. It was like being his babysitter instead of his bodyguard.
I Spy Two Haters/Lovers
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