We can use this part to add a misunderstanding, to make their relationship better.
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Here, I think we can add a few more sibling conversations in the coming plot of the story?? Anybody??
"That's fine, but you irritate me enough at home already, I don't think I will be able to take that normally at work." Ashley was deadly serious with her lines.
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Firstly, love to all. Keep loving keep sharing the book so it can grow... pls Genuine Review; Damien and Megan are not written into the typical shadow of business people but are at the very same time shown as humans. The characters are portrayed in a very different form as everyone other than Ashley has a lot, so quite a good story. I got a few spoilers from the author herself, hence I know all of this. BTW she has put effort into my last idea Criticism: The story is a little too fast running here and there and suddenly slows down a lot otherwise. I think that needs work, another point is that there should be side stories since so far we are only able to know the main characters. All the best Author!!
I removed that comment since I wanted to add another review and my idea was perfectly portrayed here anyways.
Guys I keep reading the more, the greater it turns out, tho not put in right words she definitely has a solid base for a story here
Nope it's not the FL...
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Urban · Rashima_
Spoiler!! This plan will get cancelled in the story.
"Then let's meet together at the XXX Restaurant by 8 pm this Saturday then"
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