D3adH3ad_249

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2022-01-15 Joined United Kingdom
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D3adH3ad_249
1 years ago
Posted

Great story needs a little bit of work but you can tell author has put a lot of thought and effort into world and character building and battle scenarios [img=recommend]

D3adH3ad_249
D3adH3ad_249
1 years ago
Replied to Small_Otaku

Great story could use an edit from a person with a better grasp on the English language but I don't mind as its not your main language status updates could be less frequent or remove all skill descriptions and just show basic level and stat increases it grinds my gears when chapters have status screens taking up a good portion when we seen it on the previous chapter with no changes but over all great story [img=update]

D3adH3ad_249
D3adH3ad_249
1 years ago
Commented

ruined the story with missing chapters but still posting new chapters ?

D3adH3ad_249
D3adH3ad_249
1 years ago
Posted

Great read eagerly awaiting new chapters

D3adH3ad_249
D3adH3ad_249
2 years ago
Posted

Great read hurry up and put out new chapters 👍