ArtemisHart

ArtemisHart

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ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Commented

Please take care of yourself, dear author 🙏 And if you feel guilty, please remember that your fans would rather wait for your usual, quality content than for you to push yourself to release chapters often which you have not have the opportunity to write/finish/edit to your satisfaction ☺️❤️

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Replied to Renniana

Spoiler question She lost it, ok. But, is she incapable of ever having another child? Not wanting to be rude, but miscarriages happen.

"Though it would be three of us if you ever give me a child," he said humorously, caressing her stomach.

Under the Oak Tree

Under the Oak Tree

Fantasy · Suji Kim

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Replied to ArtemisHart

Unfortunately, as you progress in the story, the writing becomes more sloppy. There are issues with sentence structures, punctuation and grammar. I don't know if it is an issue of quantity over quality or a change in editor .

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Posted

I am really liking this story so far and it is overall well written, without many grammar or spelling mistakes. But there is one thing really bothering me 😬 they keep taking baths, twice a day, every day 🤷🙅🤦🏽‍♀️ I'm sorry, but in a medieval like world, even the highest of nobility would not take baths every day, let alone twice a day. And to be honest, neither should anyone do that, it's not good for your skin to wash it with soap so often. Also, undergarments. Clearly, those are written with a modern concept in mind.

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Commented

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However, even before a single arrow could make its way out of the bow, all the guards got pushed back by a strong invisible force of energy. Before they realized what was happening, the huge gate of the palace opened. 

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Commented

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Just as General Cavrois turned around to look at his equally confused men, he saw Sir Berolt's horse galloping towards him as if in a hurry. 

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Commented

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"I would like to excuse myself too," he said before riding away to catch up with the two. 

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Commented

Royal harem?! ... How great 😬

Though the Queen hated the King's evil daughter, she was always careful about her status as queen and was always careful and respectful with her words towards King Armen. In everyone's eyes, she was a powerful and kind queen who supported her king and wholeheartedly cared for the kingdom's welfare, and it was an undeniable truth. Queen Niobe was the daughter of the powerful King of Othinia, and ever since she joined King Armen's royal harem twenty-five years ago, she had done everything to aid her husband's success.

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Replied to MrShadowMan

🤣🤣🤣

"I have a magic medicine for you. If you take it, it will be healed in no time. Let me get it for you." I turned to go to the dresser inside my room as I continued to talk. "Martha gave me this magic medicine, but it's of no use for me." My voice lowered as I mumbled, "As if I can even go somewhere to hurt myself."

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20

ArtemisHart
ArtemisHart
2 years ago
Replied to DiptiAgrawal

But will he be confident enough to refuse to hand over her sister 😅

Two crown princes happened to step out of the castle only to witness what could only be considered an elegantly bloody massacre.

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Witch's Daughter And The Devil's Son

Fantasy · Mynovel20