Hey guys, Rzora speaking! Usually authors would give their own work a 5/5. But personally I don't think my work is good enough for that. I may change it, if I deemed it worthy enough of a 5/5. But honestly speaking there only barely any chapter for you to based your opinion on. Anyway I want to flesh out more of the power system and wolrd building without spoiling to much. So first, "What the story about?": A rats of society, someone one who no longer have a place come back, Aeter (short for Aeternum, which is Latin for eternity, lazy I know), and his mysterious sister Kaula. Followed his path to discovered the hell inside everyone of us with his own hell that nobody can never hope to understand. Yes this story contained some or a lot of philosophy. I will have to read a lot of philosophical book for this. "What is Mark?": Mark is a manifestation of one's being, Mark will grow along side of the user until one day it will be awaken through strong emotions such as fear, happiness, sadness,... usually the cause of an "Awaken" is trauma, *wink* *wink* "How is the world building?": Currently when I'm writing this there not much chapter so I didn't delve much into world building yet. But as a fan and a readers who was fascinated by LOTM insane world building a lore. I also want my to world to be as real as LOTM. "Writing quality": Yeah it kinda bad right imo, but it certainly will improved, just need some experience... I hope. "Will there be love interest?": Yes! Three to be exact, no it's not incest, and yet Aeter an Kaula are 100% blood related and I'll never change that. But I do plan 3 different love interests with different personalities and story and not based their entire personality on the fact that they loved the MC. "Will it be a harem then?": Heheheh, Not sure, *wink* *wink* Honestly there not much going on right now but my plan is that to make a novel where I can enjoyed by incorporate all the part I like about novels. So if any of my plan does not to your liking, then it's fine everyone have their own reference. Though I'm sure some of the plot I have in mind will change over time but all that I said in here would still be valid in the official work... unless I want to be trendy and give Aeter a system with a 20 girls harem or something. Anyways, Rzora, Peace!
At least she and Faith have something common they both love shinies (normal shinies and Diablo's shinning abs)
I watched as Iena's eyes went wide, and she nodded her head. And suddenly wrapped her arms around me. "Master is smart!"
Fantasy · invayne
now kiss
"Why!? Why are you forcing me to become a servant of a lower being!?" Iena had tears in her eyes as if she had been completely betrayed. But Diablo's expression did not change in the slightest as the contract formed between the two of us. By her reaction, I do believe Iena is in love with Diablo.
Fantasy · invayne
That is a very oddly specific number
[Health]: 1203746/1203746
Fantasy · invayne
Where shinies?
"That doesn't mean she can just go and name any man my fiance! I don't even have a boyfriend! Diablo is a summon!" I yelled out, only to have my brother give me a sympathetic gaze. Why do I feel like the corner of his lips are twitching as if he is trying to hide his smile? This bastard is making fun of me in his head!
Fantasy · invayne
Very poor choice of words
But what I heard next was the last straw. "You were born!"
Fantasy · invayne
Just barge in someone's office and fucking sole their first kiss. What a chad.
The door suddenly slammed open, causing Annie and me to jump. Adel came marching into the room and around my desk. She then reached out and grabbed my face, and before I knew it, Adel's lips were on mine. It was only for a second, a very split second, before she pulled back and stood in front of me with wide eyes…. "I guess it is love…." Was what slipped from her mouth as she stared at me with rosy cheeks.
Fantasy · invayne
No, no no no no no. Don't you dare raise the freaking flag Adel.
"I don't know! I just get aggravated when any man or girl is near you! I feel like I might lose you." Adel replied, her voice going softer. But she raised her head and continued: "I had a dream where you went far away!"
Fantasy · invayne
Ah, classic Adel
"Mmm…. But I do wonder one thing…" Annie said as she held onto my arm tighter and stared off towards the door. "If I were to give you a peck on the cheek right now, would the one standing on the other side of the door lose it completely?"
Fantasy · invayne
There was a problem occurred during the publication process, so this prologue should has been prolohue 4 not 3, sorry for my mistake. I trying to fix it but right now I don't know how to.
Sword's Path of The Reincarnated Painter
Fantasy · Rzora