amanda_Ferris

11 months ago

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This was poorly written, very confusing. The chapters continued to introduce the main character. You are writing from John view ,then from Eleanor veiw

ch 19 mix ( Elenore)

The Villain's Lament

Fantasy · Reveries_

amanda_Ferris

1 years ago

Commented

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ch 24 Meeting Ji Hui

Crying Brothers: The Little Sister We Hate Is Actually a Bigshot

Urban · Mountain Springs

amanda_Ferris

1 years ago

Commented

The Doctor has an over-active imagination

ch 18 The Young Lady Was Daring

I Woke My Disabled Husband up at Wedding Night!

General · Wisps of blue smoke

amanda_Ferris

2 years ago

Commented

I'm really enjoying this novel Author please stop repeating the ending of each paragraphs in the next chapter.Story line beautiful and very enjoyable but again repeating and explaining same situation

ch 24 What Really Happened?

REINCARNATED AS YOUNG MASTER LU'S BRIDE

Urban · jennakim