Alison_Woods

2d

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Those boys. *sigh* Maybe War has learned his lesson this time that military does not equal friends.

'War is a bitch, and Death always follows War,' Violence said, and once again, I had to stop my physical body from shrugging.

Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Third Time's a Charm

Sci-fi · Devilbesideyou666

Alison_Woods

5d

Commented

ummm. The base was begging them for help, not the other way around...

"I will not be obeying anyone. This is my base, and if you don't like it, feel free to get out. But if you are looking for sanctuary under my protection, you will follow my orders."

Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Third Time's a Charm

Sci-fi · Devilbesideyou666

Alison_Woods

25d

Commented

Brilliant. It's the details like this that add to your amazing writing. When the saying is 'a shiny gold star' and she thinks 'dull gold star', I love it! Of course, you wouldn't want a shiny star. The zombies would be all over that!

"What do you mean by that?" He asked, trying to figure out where my brain was going. If he could figure that out then I would give him a dull gold star.

Rebirth in the Apocalypse: Third Time's a Charm

Sci-fi · Devilbesideyou666

Alison_Woods

2yr

Commented

ohhhh. missing epi-pen... 😱

“Her heart gave out,” Bell said with a sniffle. “She came out of the coma, her adrenaline spiked harder than ever before, and no one could catch it in time.”